我叫XXX,来自XX,是一名大专生。有良好的沟通和协调能力,责任心强,有一定的逻辑分析能力及处理问题的能力。曾在XX部门做过半年,之后在XX部门做过两年多技术活,现在打算往XX管理部门这方面发展
技术活怎么说呢?不一定要个技术员
追答technical works
追问那你再修改一下,前面就不能用AS吧
追答I'm XXX, I come from XX, I am a assosiate student. I have the ability of good communication and coordination, good responsibility, and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions. I have once worked in XX department for half a year, then worked in XX department and have done some technical works for more two years, now I am planning to develope in XX Management Department.
追问责任心强要加主语吗,放在那能独立成句吗,影响不
追答不影响,全都加上就太生硬啦。。。
追问ok !thank you
追答不客气。。。