哪位帮我的一篇英语作文修改下，非常感谢

Question

假如你是李华，你们班来自美国的交流生Arthur患病住院已经三周，请用英文给他写封信。
信的主要内容：询问病情，表示关切。 介绍班级最近活动，学习情况等。 表达祝愿

Dear Arthur,
It has been three weeks since you went to hospital.We are worring about you every time and missing you every day.I wander how do you feel now and Iwish you are better.
Being an exchange student from foreign,you just can not adapt youself well to a whole new environment.I think you can get over it with our help.During you absence,we have arised a fierce discussion about how to grow up happyily and healthily,a great number of students delivered their own view.More important,the sports meet is arriving and will last for 3 days,you can not miss it.With the wonderful sports meet approaching,we are looking forword your recover.Take care of yourself!
Best wishes!
yours,
Lihua
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Answer 1

翻译后是：
亲爱的亚瑟，
它一直以来的三个星期你去了医院。我们担心你每次想你每一天。我想你现在感觉如何，希望你是更好的。
作为一个交换学生来自外国，你就不能适应一个全新的环境很好。我想你可以到我们的帮助。在你缺席的情况下，我们也引起激烈的讨论如何长大能否健康的发展，大量的学生发表自己的看法。更重要的是，这运动会时，将持续3天，你不能错过它。与美妙的运动会的临近，我们正期待您的恢复。照顾好你自己！
万事如意。
你的，
李华
我相信，你应该看懂了，我试着改一下……
Dear Arthur,
The three week we go to your hospital. We miss you, worry about you day. I think how you feel now, hope you are well.
As an exchange student from a foreign country, you can't adapt to a new environment. I think you can come to our help. In the case of your absence, we also caused a heated discussion can you healthy development, a large number of students to express their views. More importantly, games, will last 3 days, you can't miss it. With the wonderful Games approaching, we are looking forward to your return. Take good care of yourself!
Best wishes.
You,
Li Hua
意思是：
亲爱的亚瑟，
三个星期我们去了你所在的医院 。我们每次想你，就担心你一天。我想你现在感觉如何，希望你是很好的。
作为一个交换生来自外国，你不能适应一个全新的环境。我想你可以到我们的帮助。在你缺席的情况下，我们也引起激烈的讨论你能否健康的发展，大量的学生发表自己的看法。更重要的是，运动会，将持续3天，你不能错过它。与美妙的运动会的临近，我们正期待你的恢复。照顾好你自己！
万事如意。
你的，
李华

Answer 2

Dear Arthur,
It has been three weeks since you went to hospital.We are worried about you every time and miss you every day.I wander how you feel now and I wish you are better.
Being an exchange student from a foreign country,you just can not adapt youself well to a whole new environment.I think you can get over it with our help.During your absence,we have arised a fierce discussion about how to grow up happyily and healthily,a great number of students delivered their own views.More importantly,the sports meet is arriving and will last for 3 days,you can not miss it.With the wonderful sports meet approaching,we are looking forword to your recovering.Take care of yourself!
Best wishes!
yours,
Lihua
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Answer 3

Dear Arthur,
It has been three weeks since you went to hospital.We are worried about you every time and miss you every day.I wander how you feel now and I wish you are better.
Being an exchange student from a foreign country,you just can not adapt youself well to a whole new environment.I think you can get over it with our help.During your absence,we have arised a fierce discussion about how to grow up happyily and healthily,a great number of students delivered their own views.More importantly,the sports meet is arriving and will last for 3 days,you can not miss it.With the wonderful sports meet approaching,we are looking forword to your recovering.Take care of yourself!
Best wishes!

Answer 4

问题: 你说 we have arised a fierce discussion about how to grow up happyily and healthily,a great number of students delivered their own view. 是想表达什么? 还有，the sports meet is arriving and will last for 3 days 是想说"sports meet会持续3天" 还是 "过三天就是sports meet"? 其他的我先帮您改一下。

Dear Arthur,
It has been three weeks since you went to the hospital. We're worried sick about you and yearn for your return. How do you feel? I hope you feel better.

I know it's difficult to adapt to a new environment, especially for a foreign exchange student like yourself. Don't worry, we'll help you adjust quickly. During your absence, ________________________. More importantly, the day of the sport's meet is approaching quickly, and you can't miss it! We wish for your fast recovery in time for the sports meet. Take care of yourself!

Best Wishes,
Lihua

参考资料：我是美国学校的学生。