帮我修改一下英语作文!十分感谢!

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Compared with some western countries, China is indeed performing worse than them in evaluating a student's ability.

个人觉得应该用Comparing ，主语China 与compare 是应该主动的关系吧

Those who have a good memory may get a satisfying mark.

主语是复数，后面的宾语最好用复数吧

Those who have good memories may get satisfying marks.

Second最好改成Secondly 用副词做状语更好一点

Also, the college entrance exam may initimate the students into cramming.

这句话的主语与谓语动词不一致，应改成

Also, the college entrance exam may initimates the students into cramming.

或者Also, the college entrance exams may initimate the students into cramming.

there is more or less fortune, or more exactly, inaccuracy in one exam.

这句中的exactly用错了，应该用一个名词和fortune，inaccuracy对应

The people who are admitted to colleges were regarded as the "fortune-favored" children.

这句话的时态有问题，are 和were用在一个句子中是不是矛盾了，我看你整篇文章都是现在时，

这句话最好改成

The people who are admitted to colleges are regarded as the "fortune-favored" children

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不敢苟同。

1，不知道看哪本书上面写，secondly是用在非正式的文体里。

2，Also, the college entrance exam may initimate the students into cramming.

may后面应该用动词原形啊，没错啊。你反而改错了吧。

3，there is more or less fortune, or more exactly, inaccuracy in one exam. 这句的意思是：多多少少，在考试中都会存在运气，或者更准确地说，不准确。追问

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第1个回答 2016-05-15

写字写得好丑追问

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还要我改

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