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I like a person
William is my good friend, I very like him, because he is very enthusiastic, he often help the students solve their difficulties, including me.
Two years ago, I ride my bike to go home, because of my not be careful, I fell and then I feel my feet very painful, and can't move, as I helpless, my classmate William met, he immediately will I lift up and help me a foot massage. I was very moved and didn't know what to say, but he might let me always unforgettable. At the same time, we become good friends

第一句 help后+s
第三句 ride变rode not be 变not being
fell后+down feel变felt
第四句 can't变couldn't helpless前+was
met后+me will I lift up变lifted me up
第五句 help 变helped a foot massage前+had
第六句 unforgettable前+be become变became
这是些词汇方面的问题 另外你可以把very换些其他的 像quite badly 之类的
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第1个回答  2012-08-26
help---helps
me---mne
ride--rode
not be careful -----carelessness
fell----fell down
feel---felt
helpless-----was holpless
met ---met me
will l lift up----lifted me up
help--helped
a foot message ---had a foot message
unforgettable---be unforgettable
become--became
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