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i want to be a business man when i graduate,as it has the opportunity to travel arould with business,it also could broden my eyesight,and i can stagger my schedule flexibly.有没有语法错误

我毕业后我想成为一名商人,因为可以利用做生意的同时去旅游,也可以开阔我的眼界,我可以错开安排比较灵活。追问

有没有语法错误

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