高分求译，急！

Question

1. 帮我把中文的部分翻译成英文，都是一些比较简单的句子。
2. 文段中已有的英文内容可能有较多错误，帮我修改一下。
3. 必须人脑翻译，我今天晚上会选出最佳答案，多谢大家帮忙。

音乐是陶冶性情的熔炉

Music plays an important role in our daily life. We can enjoy it in anywhere. For example, if you have a radio, a TV set,

a personal computer, a video, a CD player, a MP3 player, even a cellphone, you can listen to the music. Wen you are at a bar

or at school, you will hear the music too.
音乐可以陶冶情操, 缓解压力, 愉悦心情, If you are 郁闷, 听音乐 may be a simple way.
Music can 分为 pop music, rock music, jazz music, blues and so on.
我们最常听的是 pop music, 也会 touch 到一些民族音乐和古典音乐.
现在的很多流行乐, 熔入了古典的元素.
你现在听到的是 S.H.E 的《不想长大》, 它是基于莫扎特的第四十号交响曲.
你现在听到的是周杰伦的《夜曲》, 下面我们听一下肖邦的《夜曲》.
还有这些：

1. Can you name the music you are listening in English or in Chiness?
这首是莫扎特的第四十号交响曲.
这首是肖邦的夜曲.
这首是贝多芬的命运交响曲.
这首是约翰·施特劳斯的蓝色的多瑙河.
这首是贝多芬的月光奏鸣曲.

2. Can you name some musical instruments?
guitar, piano, violin, 萨克斯, (帮我列一些其他常见的)

3. Can you list some 外国音乐家?
莫扎特, 贝多芬, 肖邦, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

4. Can you list some 中国歌唱家?
Song Zuying, Yu Junjian, Fei Yuqing, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

5. Can you list some 中国歌星?
刘得华, 张惠妹, 范玮琪, 周华健, 任贤齐, 周杰伦, 林俊杰, 小刚, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

6. Can you sing an English song? Just try it!
Jingle Bells, Yesterday Once More, Take Me To You Heart, Pretty Boy, (帮我列一些其他常见的)

March是一种富有节奏步伐的歌曲，常见的有瓦格纳的《婚礼进行曲》，门德尔松的《婚礼进行曲》，《义勇军进行曲》，《运动员进行曲》。

Answer 1

音乐是陶冶性情的熔炉
music is a furnace which can edify your temper.

Music plays an important role in our daily life. We can enjoy it in anywhere. For example, if you have a radio, a TV set, a personal computer, a video, a CD player, a MP3 player, even a cellphone, you can listen to the music. When you are at a bar or at school, you will hear the music too.
（这是一段话把 呵呵 你复制过来都不看的。）
音乐在我们日常生活中起着很重要的作用，我们无论在哪里都可以享受音乐。比如，你可以通过收音机，看电视，电脑，录像，CD机，MP3播放器，甚至是手机来享受音乐。当你在酒吧或者学校你也可以听见音乐.

音乐可以陶冶情操, 缓解压力, 愉悦心情, If you are 郁闷, 听音乐 may be a simple way.
Music can edify your temper, relax pressure, enjoy your mind, if you are upset, listening may be a simple way.
Music can divide into pop music, rock music, jazz music, blues and so on.(音乐可以分为…..等等)
我们最常听的是 pop music, 也会 touch 到一些民族音乐和古典音乐.
We most often listen to the pop music, and also touch some national and classic music.
现在的很多流行乐, 熔入了古典的元素.
A lot of pop music now combine with classic elements.
你现在听到的是 S.H.E 的《不想长大》, 它是基于莫扎特的第四十号交响曲.
Now you’re hearing the《 Unwilling to grow up 》by S.H.E, it is base on the 40th symphony of Mozart.
你现在听到的是周杰伦的《夜曲》, 下面我们听一下肖邦的《夜曲》.
Now you’re hearing the Nocturne by Jay Chou, next we come to the Nocturne by Chopin.

1. Can you name the music you are listening in English or in Chiness?
这首是莫扎特的第四十号交响曲.
This is the 40th Symphony of Mozart.

这首是肖邦的夜曲.
This is Chopin's Nocturne.

这首是贝多芬的命运交响曲.
This is the destiny symphony of Beethoven.

这首是约翰•施特劳斯的蓝色的多瑙河.
This is John •Strauss’ Blue Danube Strauss.

这首是贝多芬的月光奏鸣曲
This is Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata.

2. Can you name some musical instruments?
guitar, piano, violin, Sax(萨克斯), Zither(古筝), Accordion(手风琴)

3. Can you list some foreign musician?
巴赫Bach 海顿Haydn 莫扎特Mozart 贝多芬Beethoven 舒伯特Schubert 肖邦Chopin
柴可夫斯基Tchaikovsky.

4. Can you list some Chinese singer?
Song Zuying, Yu Junjian, Fei Yuqing,Zu hai (祖海) 汤灿 马玉涛>罗天婵>罗宁娜

5. Can you list some Chinses pop singer?
刘得华, 张惠妹, 范玮琪, 周华健, 任贤齐, 周杰伦, 林俊杰, 小刚,成龙

6. Can you sing an English song? Just try it!
Jingle Bells, Yesterday Once More, Take Me To You Heart, Pretty Boy, Rock you(帮我列一些其他常见的)
去网上随便查一下吧 我要下班没时间了.嘿嘿

March是一种富有节奏步伐的歌曲，常见的有瓦格纳的《婚礼进行曲》，门德尔松的《婚礼进行曲》，《义勇军进行曲》，《运动员进行曲》。

March is a rhythmed song, familiar songs such as Wagner’s Wedding march, Mendelssohn’s Wedding march, "Volunteer march," "athletes march"

哎 半个小时。 真麻烦 我是快下班了没事做，呵呵 我也算负责任了把，楼主看看把。觉得好就给我分。。

Answer 2

音乐是陶冶性情的熔炉 : music refines mind and purifies the soul

Music plays an important role in our daily lives. We can enjoy it anywhere, as long as you have a TV , a radio, a personal computer, a video, a CD player, a MP3 player, even a cellphone. Whether you're at a bar or at school, you are free to enjoy the music you like.

Music can mold character, relieve stress and ameliorate your mood. If you are depressed, listen to some music, take a break to smell the roses.
Music can classified into pop, rock, jazz and so on.

Pop music is our most popular choice, though we often touch upon some cultural and traditional music, especially now that pop music has had many traditional elements integrated.

When you listen to (Never Grow Up) by SHE, you may not realize that it's based on Mozart's fortieth symphony.

You're now listening to (Night Tales) by ZhouJieLun, next, let's compare that with a song of the same name by Xiao Bang.

问题补充：还有这些：

1. Can you name the music you are listening in English or in Chiness?
Beethoven's Symphonies (1-9), Beethoven's 4th and 14th piano sonata,

2. Can you name some musical instruments?
Violin, Piccolo, Viola, Flute, Cello, Oboe, English Horn, Harp
Tambourine, Trumpet, Triangle Trombone, Tuba,French Horn, Piano, Gong , Harpsichord, Bassoon, Snare Drum, Cymbals, Saxophone

3. Can you list some foreign musicians?
Bach, Johann Sebastian
Beethoven, Ludwig van
Brahms, Johannes
Chopin, Frederic (Fryderyk)
Elgar, Sir Edward William
Handel, George Frederic
Holst, Gustav (Theodore)
Mahler, Gustav
Mendelssohn, (Jacob Ludwig) Felix
Mozart, Wolfgang Amadeus
Schumann, Robert Alexander

4. Can you list some Chinese musicians
Song Zuying, Yu Junjian, Fei Yuqing

5. Can you list some popular Chinese singers
刘得华, 张惠妹, 范玮琪, 周华健, 任贤齐, 周杰伦, 林俊杰, 小刚, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

6. Can you sing an English song? Just try it!
Jingle Bells, Yesterday Once More, Take Me To You Heart, Pretty Boy,

Answer 3

Music is a melting pot temperament temperament
Music plays an important role in our daily life. We can enjoy it in anywhere. For example, if you have a radio, a TV set,

a personal computer, a video, a CD player, a MP3 player, even a cellphone, you can listen to the music. Wen you are at a bar

or at school, you will hear the music too.
Music can mold character，Alleviate stress，Pleasant feelings，If you are despondence，Listening to music may be a simple way.
Music can Divided into pop music, rock music, jazz music, blues and so on.
We most often hear are pop music, Will touch Some folk music and classical music.
Now a lot of pop music, fused into a classical element.
You now hear are SHE's "do not want to grow up", which is based on Mozart's 40th Symphony.
You now hear are Jay Chou's "Nocturne," the following, we listen to Chopin's "Nocturne."

1. Can you name the music you are listening in English or in Chiness?
This is the first Mozart's 40th Symphony.
This is the first Chopin's Nocturne.
This is the first symphony is Beethoven's destiny.
This is the first Johann Strauss's Blue Danube.
This first is Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata.
2. Can you name some musical instruments?
guitar, piano, violin, Sax, (帮我列一些其他常见的)

3. Can you list some Foreign musicians?
Mozart, Beethoven, Chopin, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

4. Can you list some Chinese singer?
Song Zuying, Yu Junjian, Fei Yuqing, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

5. Can you list some Chinese singers?
刘得华, 张惠妹, 范玮琪, 周华健, 任贤齐, 周杰伦, 林俊杰, 小刚, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

6. Can you sing an English song? Just try it!
Jingle Bells, Yesterday Once More, Take Me To You Heart, Pretty Boy, (帮我列一些其他常见的)

Answer 4

修改部分：a radio和a tv set中间加个OR，you will hear the music too去掉，吧when you are in the bar改为whether you are in a bar or at school
中译英：music is a meltpot which can develop your mind
music can develop your mind ,relief yourself andmake you happy ,when you feel sad ,listening to music may be asimple way to relief yourself,music can divided into many parts ,like pop music,rock music,jazz music,blues and so on.in many times,we often listen to the pop music,sometimes folk music or classical music,today many pop music has mixed with classical element,now you are listening to the song[bu xiang zhangda] by SHE,it is created on the base of [mozart Symphony No.14],you are listening to the song [ye qu] by jay,then let us listen to the song [yequ]by Fryderyk Franciszek Chopin
Can you name the music you are listening in English or in Chiness?
Beethoven's Symphonies (1-9), Beethoven's 4th and 14th piano sonata,

2. Can you name some musical instruments?
Violin, Piccolo, Viola, Flute, Cello, Oboe, English Horn, Harp
Tambourine, Trumpet, Triangle Trombone, Tuba,French Horn, Piano, Gong , Harpsichord, Bassoon, Snare Drum, Cymbals, Saxophone

3. Can you list some foreign musicians?
Bach, Johann Sebastian
Beethoven, Ludwig van
Brahms, Johannes
Chopin, Frederic (Fryderyk)
Elgar, Sir Edward William
Handel, George Frederic
Holst, Gustav (Theodore)
Mahler, Gustav
Mendelssohn, (Jacob Ludwig) Felix
Mozart, Wolfgang Amadeus
Schumann, Robert Alexander

4. Can you list some Chinese musicians
Song Zuying, Yu Junjian, Fei Yuqing

5. Can you list some popular Chinese singers
刘德华, 张惠妹, 范玮琪, 周华健, 任贤齐, 周杰伦, 林俊杰, 小刚, (帮我列一些其他著名的)

6. Can you sing an English song? Just try it!
Jingle Bells, Yesterday Once More, Take Me To You Heart, Pretty Boy,