本人英语不是很好,帮忙看一下语法对不对。马上上学要用!!!!!!!!!!急急急急急急急急急!!!!!!!!!!、、、、
Hello everybody
My name is Jin Shixi
I'm 13 years old
I like singing and drawing
I'm good at drawing and many of my drawings have won prizes
My favorite colour is sapphire blue
My favorite music group is Super Junior,their songs are fascinating And i'm a happy and talented girl
I am very happy to come here to study with you
I hope you can like me
And I can become you friend soon
Thank you very much!