第1个回答 2006-12-12
There are many kinds of athletic sports, such as swimming, football, golf and so on. Among these sports, I like badminton best because it not only can exerise my body, but also can reduse my weight. No matter how busy I am, I will spend some time each week playing badminton. When I see the badminton flying in the sky, my heart will full of pleasure.
第2个回答 2006-12-12
楼上的,你是中学生吗?还在用 so on
还有not only要用在can后面,当然你那样用也可以,只是感觉没这个好.
减肥那个单词你是不是写错了(reduce?),lose weight
some 改成a few
还有spend应该加个on 这是常识 哎
你这看上去觉对的象一篇小学生的文章.
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