children's lives.At the age of five,I was serious ill and my life was in danger.Myparents were all worried if I could recover from the disease,I was lucky enough to meet Dr.Jack,a great doctor who is always east to talk.He did lots of different tests to find the medicine to cure me.I owe to him that I am still alive.Dr.Jack,he has made a big difference to the lives of others,is respected by many people in our city.改错