学校将要举办英语演讲比赛，请你以China Dream , My dream 为题，根据以下提示写一篇参赛演讲稿，谈谈你的梦想（你想成为什么或做什么）。提示: l. What’s your dream? 2. Why do you have this dream? 3. How will you make your dream come true?要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。2 .词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。China Dream, My Dream Hi, everyone! As we know, China Dream is the dream of every Chinese. As a student, my dream is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for listening .
| China Dream, My Dream Hi, everyone! As we know, China Dream is the dream of every Chinese. As a student, my dream is to become a teacher，because I am good at singing, dancing and love children. If I become a teacher, I will work with children, teach them a lot of knowledge and I will be happy. In order to make my dream come true, I will study harder than before and read a lot of books to get more knowledge at school. I am going to help my parents do some housework as possible as I can. I will finish my homework on time at home. From now on, I plan to do more exercise to build me up in my free time. And this can make me feel active to do things. As the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way." And I believe I will realize my dream one day. Thank you for listening. |
| 试题分析：这是一篇演讲比赛稿，首先要用正确的格式去写，首位有礼貌用语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，演讲稿中介绍了自己的兴趣爱和打算，所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。 【亮点说明】短文用了一些名言，为文章增色不少，如：As the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way."等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：in order to，and等。 |