英语翻译，这句话有语法错误吗？

Question

Now you realize the tuition
is skyhigh in law school. But you will know your payment is gonna be higher than sky when you become a lawyer.
这句话有语法错误吗？

Answer 1

payment在这里应该是“报酬”的意思，这句话应该是劝说别人去读法律
两句话用But连起来就不应该是递进关系，而是转折关系，故说这句话的人的意思应该不是二楼所翻译的
其意思应为“现在你意识到法律学院的学费是天价，但当你成为律师后你就会知道你所得到的报酬将比天价还高”
如果说这句话的人真是这样的意思，这句话应该改成“Maybe you realize the tuition
is skyhigh in law school now,But you will know that the pay you get will be higher than sky when you become a lawyer.
”较为OK。
如果说这句话的人的意思如二楼所翻译，那应该这样表达“you just realize the tuition
is skyhigh in law school now,you shoud know that your payment will be higher than sky when you become a lawyer.
”较为OK。

Answer 2

我觉得Now you realize the tuition应该成Now you have realized the tuition因为说这话的人应该代表对方已经知道所以用have realized

the tuition is skyhigh in law school我觉得in 换成of好一点，表示“....的”另外加s ：schools

But you will know your payment is gonna be higher than sky when you become a lawyer.
我觉得改一下is gonna be ----is going to be 会好一点，因为是更正式的将来时表示

Answer 3

现在你知道了，在法学院学习的学费可是天价。
但你以后还会知道，当你成为一个律师，你要付出的还将比天价更高。

语法没错误。可能是一个父亲劝他孩子别去学习法律，也别从事法律方面，不仅学费高，以后负担也重。

Answer 4

没有！如果加上代词that会更容易分析语法结构！
Now you realize 【that】the tuitionis skyhigh in law school.
But you will know【that】 your payment is gonna be higher than sky when you become a lawyer.
其中that引导的是宾语从句可以省略！第二句中when引导的是宾语从句的时间状语从句

Answer 5

我认为前半句要改为now you have realized...
后半句应该没啥问题

Answer 6

your payment is gonna be higher 这里错了，两个系动词不能连用啊！把is改成will~追问

Everything is gonna be OK.这句话人家都用烂了，也有错误？