英语高手请进:帮忙翻译一下(因为是一封信,所以能在开头结尾适当的加点问候语就更好了.谢谢)

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英语高手请进:帮忙翻译一下(因为是一封信,所以能在开头结尾适当的加点问候语就更好了.谢谢)
~~教授：
好久没有和您联系了,最近好吗?
我经过拜读老师的论文以及阅读一些相关的书籍之后，对社会心理学有了近一步的了解。我发现社会心理学真的是非常有意思的学科，越学越有兴趣。
我现在已经把“研究计划书”作好了。您可以帮我看看还有什么不足的地方吗?我会立刻修改的.
(尽量委婉一些好吗?毕竟是给教授写信~~~谢谢,当然,不用直译,把主要意思翻译出来就行,要委婉~~尊敬~~~谢谢)

Answer 1

赫赫 我留学4年多了
写这个轻松

Dear *Professor,

It's been a long time that I didn't contact with you. Hope that everything is on the track.

I get lots of new informations for Social psychology after reading relevant paper staff especially those written by you. I found myself really interested in this subject. So I finish my "research plan" and could you just have a look at it. I will be appreciated i f you give me any advice.

Looking forward for your reply.
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Best wishes
Your faithfully
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Answer 2

~ ~ Professor:
No contact you for a long time, recently okay?
After I read the papers and reading teachers some relevant books, a pair of social psychology closer understanding. I found that social psychology is really interesting subjects, the study will be interested.
I now have the "research plan" made. You can help me look at what deficiencies in? I will immediately make changes.
(Euphemism as some okay? After all, the professor wrote ~ ~ ~ Thank you, of course, not literal translation, the main means to be translated to tactfully ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Thank you, the distinguished)

Answer 3

Professor XXX:

Has not related for a long time with you, recently?
After I pass through read teacher's paper as well as reads some related books, to the social psychology had the near step understanding.I discovered the social psychology really has the meaning discipline extremely, more studies more has the interest.
I already finished now "the research prospectus".What insufficient place can you help me to have a look also to have? I can revise immediately.