我第一次写英语作文，大家帮我看看吧拜托各位了 3Q

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我第一次写英语作文，大家帮我看看有没有不通顺和错的地方，谢谢啊 My room Open the door. Oh，the room is very beautiful! Whose room is this? It’s my room. The bed is near the window. a quilt and a doll is on the bed. What color is my bed? It’s my favorite color—purple. It’s very dreamily color. The dresser is next to the bed. There are some books a telephone and a plant on the dresser. The carpet is under the dog. The dog's name is HuaHua，it’s my friend！ I like watching TV. The TV is before the bed. I an lie to watch TV on the bed. I have a bookcase. The bookcase is near the bed set. An alarm clock is on the bookcase I like to lie on the bed reading. And the computer is near the door. I often play the computer. This is my room. I like my room. Do you like my room? What about your room?

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全篇已经帮你修改完毕了,选我吧?西西^ My room I Open the door. Oh，what a beautiful room is it!Whose room is this? It’s my room. The bed is near the window. a quilt and a doll are on the bed. What color is my bed? It’s my favorite color—purple. It’s very dreamily color. The dresser is next to the bed. There are some books ,a telephone and a plant on the dresser. The carpet is under the dog. The dog's name is HuaHua，it’s my friend！ I like watching TV. The TV set is before the bed. I like lie down the bed and watch TV on the bed. I have a bookcase. The bookcase is near the bed set. An alarm clock is on the bookcase I like to lie down the bed and read. And the computer is near the door. I often play the computer. This is my room. I like my room. Do you like my room? What about your(不用加your home)?