求翻译。。。。。。。。

尊敬的签证官大人
我在3月4号提交申请商务签证材料3月10号收到拒签信
很感谢签证官大人对此提出的疑问
1我申请的是4月1号到4月15号公司的一些培训,包括认识公司发展史,学习后台操作。我是公司新员工,所以我必须去。
2我的工资是每个月4000.包括1000的现金补贴,现提供工资单以及银行记录证明。请原谅我的户口本没有更新,马上把户口本寄回家里办理更新了。现在的户口本是最新版本。
3提供了税单证明我在上海合法工作
4我的专业是商务英语。每天在办公室用英语交流.我有能力说好英语
5在上海分公司签了3年合同我是一定会回来的
希望签证官大人能够准许发放签证
谢谢

To whom it may concern
On 4th of March, I submitted application details for my business visa. And I was application finalised on 10th of March. I wish you can consider again, following these reasons. First of all, the reason I apply this business visa is due to the company training, the training include the company history, studying how is the company operating. I have to go as I am new to the company. Second, my salary is RMB4000 per month, that is include RMB1000 cash allowance. In here I attached my latest permanent residence booklet, payslip, bank statement and tax documents that proof me I am working at the company. The most important reason is I sign a contract with my company for the next three years, no matter what happen I will return on time.
Consider all the reasons, I hope you will grant this business visa to me.

个人觉得你讲你的专业是商业英语,对你获批签证不大,反而觉得你有足够的能力过去不回来。不过这仅代表我个人想法。希望你够帮到你拿到签证。
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第1个回答  2011-03-22
Honorable Visa Officer,
I submitted application material for commercial visa on March 4th and received the refusal letter on March 10th
I would be grateful if you could reply the questions herein.
1 Why I apply for a visa is that I’m scheduled to participate in some training provided by my employer (my company) from April 1st to April 15th, which includes understanding of history of my company and learning of background operation. I’m a new employee of the company, so I have to participate in such training.
2 My monthly salary is 4000CNY,including the subsidies of 1000CNY in cash. Enclosed are the payroll and the bank statement for me. Please forgive me for not updating my residence booklet; I have posted my residence booklet to my native city for processing and updating. Now my residence booklet is the newest edition.
3 I provide the tax paying certificate, which demonstrates that I work in Shanghai legally
4My major is Business English. I communicate with my colleagues normally in English in the office.I speak English proficiently
5 I have signed with a 3-year employment contract with the Shanghai Branch and I will definitely return to my native country and my current work
I hope that you can grant the visa to me
Thanks
第2个回答  2011-03-22
我勒个去,,,一楼自动翻啊,笑死。。
第3个回答  2011-03-22
(⊙o⊙)…你最好花点钱去使馆翻译,专业的翻译没人敢瞎翻。。。
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