高中英语短文改错

Question

We went to Town Hall in wednesday in evening 1
It was the last day of the year and large crowd of 2
the people had gathered under the Town Hall clock.It 3
strike twelve after twenty minutes " time Fifteen minutes 4
passed and then at five past twelve,the clock stopped . 5
The big minutes"s hand did not move. we waited and 6
therefore nothing happened.Suddenly someone shouted. 7
"It is two minutes past twelve! The clock had stopped!" I 8
lookde my watch.It was true.The big clock refuse to 9
welcome the New Year.At that moment, everybody began to laugh and sing 10

minutes 后面的是一个撇 没打出来请大家当成一个撇 还有麻烦大家说一下为什么这么改谢谢了 明天老师要提问我的

Answer 1

1. Wednsday evening (去掉in)
2. a large crowd of
3. people gathered (去掉 had)
4. would strike / in twenty minutes' time (你打错了吧，怎么有两处错？）
5. had passed
6. minutes' hand
7. yet ( yet 此处是“然而”，therefore 是“因此”）
8. The clock has stopped (此处要用现在完成时，因前面说it is two miutes past...;而不是It was two minutes past....)注：这里空间有限讲不了太详细，此题要弄明白得复习过去完成时的概念。
9.refused (用过去时）
10.正确

Answer 2

将第一个in 改为on
crowd改为crowds
将had去掉
strike改为struck
对
去掉and
therefore改为but
在is后加上at
refuse改为refused
对

Answer 3

We went to THE Town Hall ON Wednesday evening 1
It was the last day of the year and A large crowd of 2
the people had gathered under the Town Hall clock.It 3
STRUCK twelve after twenty minutes " time Fifteen minutes 4
passed and then at five past twelve,the clock stopped . 5
The big minutes hand did not move. we waited BUT 6
nothing happened.Suddenly someone shouted. 7
"It is two minutes past twelve! The clock had stopped!" I 8
lookde my watch.It was true.The big clock refuseD to 9
welcome the New Year.At that moment, everybody began to laugh and sing 10

Answer 4

新概念英语第二册第九课 A cold welcome 原文