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Question

No one could understand me alone, I tender, I am weak, because I pretended to pretend to be strong. 这句话有错误吗？ 我想表达的意思是： 没人能懂我的寂寞，我的温柔，我的柔弱， 因为我假装在装着坚强~ 如果错的话帮我该下，谢谢~

Answer 1

1. No one could understand me
alone 是副词，在这里修饰动词 understand 了，意思成了“没有人能够单独地懂得我”。 understand 后应该改动如下：
宾语从句—— undestand that I am alone (或者lonesome) and gentle.
直接宾语—— undestand my loneliness and gentleness
2. I tender,
tender 侧重于脆弱，形容词最好用gentle，名词用 gentleness。
3. I am weak,
weak 意思是虚弱，表示身体欠佳，如果用形容词，改为 effeminate，名词则用 effeminacy
4. because I pretended to pretend to be strong.
1）两个 pretend 意思重复，删除一个；
2）改为进行时态 because I am pretending to be strong

整体修改如下：
第一种：现在时态
* No one can undestand that I am alone , gentle and effeminate, because I am pretending to be strong.
* No one can undestand my loneliness, my gentleness and my effeminacy, because I am pretending to be strong.
第二种：过去时态
* No one could undestand that I was alone , gentle and effeminate, because I was pretending to be strong.
* No one could undestand my loneliness, my gentleness and my effeminacy, because I was pretending to be strong.

Answer 2

建议不用过去式，画蛇添足。如果用过去式就暗示你现在已经不假装了。要具体根据语境决定时态。
我的寂寞，我的温柔，我的柔弱为并列名词，用and连接。
句式的对称很重要，逗号和and都表明其连接的词语，从句都必须是一致完全对称。如果选择用名词，那就都是名词，选择形容词，那都要用形容词
字面翻译为
如果用名词
no one can understand my loneliness, my tenderness and my weakness because i pretend to be strong
如果用形容词
no one can understand that i'm lonely,tender and weak because i pretend to be strong
不用alone因为i'm alone有一个人的意思容易歧义。

推荐用个so that巨型更加连贯。
i pretend to be so strong that no one can understand my loneliness,my tenderness and my weakness.

Answer 3

no one can understand my lonely, my tender, my weakness, because I have pretended to be strong.

Answer 4

No_one_could_understand_my_loneliness,my_softness,my_weakness.Because_I_always_pretend_to_be_strong.

Answer 5

Nobody could understand my lonliness, my tender and my weakness, because i'm pretending to be strong.

Answer 6

估计这位童鞋是根据汉语直接翻译的吧~汉译英没有觉得的准确，尽量帮你完善一下好了。
No one could understand my loneliness, softness as well as the weakness, for I'm pretending to be acting as a stronger.