如何评价2017高考作文上海卷“预测”

Question

如题所述

Answer 1

试题引导考生结合社会生活背景对长期而广泛存在的预测行为进行思考,较有认知意义和实践意义。预测是人类应对未知的重要行为,随着科学水平的提高,预测的工具越来越强,运用的范围也日益扩大,预测对个人和社会的影响近年来也备受瞩目。因此,如何看待预测行为,采取何种态度面对与自己有关的预测,成了每个生活在现代社会的人不可回避的问题。
题目提供了需要考生思考的行为,也指出社会既有态度的分歧。考生要对题目提供的现象进行充分思考,首先要联系题目中“生活充满变数”这一背景考察预测行为出现的原因以及这一背景对预测效果的影响,然后需要联系自身个人发展、社会生活等方面思考个人对待预测所应采取的态度。题目内容有一定的历史感,也关乎生活实际,而思考的方向则指向理性精神。
从呈现方式来看,作文题目语言通俗,表达清晰,且在下达写作指令前对核心概念做了必要的界定和思考方向的引导。这样的呈现方式有利于考生尽快适应题目内容,降低审题难度,避免浅思维习惯下应试作文的模式,从而更好落实作文所要求的测量目标。

Answer 2

Everyone knows that cycling is a fun, healthy and economical means of travel around the neighborhood.
The advantages of bicycles mainly are as follows：each commuter can drive it directly where they have to go without changing stations or modes；bicycles are much more maneuverable in city mazes, and can take to the sideways to avoid grid lock, can land on any rack, railing or parking meter right outside the place of business, and can always be carried into a building for additional parking or security；Bicycling is also good for our environment，bicycles are 100% pollution free; cycling is good for our health; besides,Bicycle riding is the least expensive way of traveling apart from walking.
Although there are so many advantages，it also has its own limitations： it is unsuitable for long journey；most bikes don't have a roof in case of rain; we can't bring our family with us, unless they have bikes of their own，etc.