英语作文的问题，我最近在学习英语，写了作文 不知道找谁改，请各位好心人帮帮忙。5月份要考试了。

Question

Advertisments
Advertisements are getting their way into people’s lives.for example:it always insert advertisments some minutes,when we watch Tv.Sometimes it upsets to me.when we walk outside,the advertisements are arounded us.In a word:advertisement not anywhere.
Does the advertisements is ture?in fact,ti is not over true.we not really always belive ourself eyes to see,bu also know and research it.I belive that a good products don,t need expressly advertising.It been known ,in doesn’t dvertise situation.
But a few people can do ti,they always believe advertisments said.Blind following and spend much mony for it,that leads to heavy loads for life.
In oen’s all life has much somethings can pursue, keep the enthusiasm for life.Let’s go together.
跪求好心人帮帮忙

Answer 1

1.1 Advertisments Advertisements are getting their way into people's lives.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: people, masses, crowd, throng, mob 均有“人们，人群”之意。
1.2 for example: it always insert advertisments some minutes, when we watch Tv.
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: moment, minute, instant 均含“瞬间，片刻”之意。
[中式英语] insert...advertisments 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
1.3 Sometimes it upsets to me.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: upset, agitate, disturb, perturb 均有“使不安，使心烦意乱”之意。
1.4 when we walk outside, the advertisements are arounded us.
[拼写错误] arounded 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: walk, stride, stroll, strut, pace 均有“行走，徒步”之意。
1.5 In a word: advertisement not anywhere.
2.6 Does the advertisements is ture?
[拼写错误] 建议将ture改为true。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...advertisement 在教材中出现过 32 次
[中式英语] does the advertisements 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
2.7 in fact, ti is not over true.
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[高分词汇] true是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为accurate 。
2.8 we not really always belive ourself eyes to see, bu also know and research it.
[拼写错误] 建议将belive改为believe。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将ourself改为ourselves。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: know, learn, comprehend, understand 都含“懂，知道，明了”之意。
2.9 I belive that a good products don, t need expressly advertising.
[拼写错误] belive 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: announce, declare, proclaim, pronounce, advertise, broadcast, publish 均含“宣布，公开”之意。
2.10 It been known , in doesn't dvertise situation.
[拼写错误] dvertise 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: condition, state, status, situation, circumstance 均有“状况，情况”之意。
3.11 But a few people can do ti, they always believe advertisments said.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。
[ 高分词汇] but是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为nonetheless或nevertheless。
[中式英语] advertisments said 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
3.12 Blind following and spend much mony for it, that leads to heavy loads for life.
[拼写错误] mony 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[动词错误] 动词 blind 后面一般不接现在分词
[学习提示] 易混词汇: pursue, follow, chase, hunt, trace, track, trail 均含“跟随，追踪”之意。
[高分词汇] lead to是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为contribute to或conduce to或result in 。
[中式英语] heavy loads for life 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
4.13 In oen's all life has much somethings can pursue, keep the enthusiasm for life.
[拼写错误] oen 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[语法检查] 建议把 much somethings 改成 many somethings (Revise...)
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: zeal, enthusiasm 均含“热情”之意。

Answer 2

改:1.the advertisements are all arounded us.
2.advertisements are everywhere
3."Does the advertisements is ture?"改为:"Does the advertisement is ture?"