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Question

Everyone had his own dreams ,and everyone want to turn it into realities.Therefore,dreams are so important in everyone's life that
everyone should hold fastly to them .Furthermore ,some people will
fail in their work or study and even in their life.In order to make your
dreams to come ture,you'd better make reaonable plan for your study
and work .On the same time ,don't lose heart if your dream failed to be
realized.Perhaps you should adjust your next plan and make a new
dream.Go on work hard,and you will succeed in realizing your deram in time.

Answer 1

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Everyone (had改成has) his own dreams, and everyone (want改成wants) to turn (it改成them) into (realities改成reality). Therefore, dreams are so important in everyone's life that everyone should hold fastly to them. (Furthermore改成However), some people will fail in their work or study and even in their life. In order to make your dreams (去掉to) come ture, you'd better make reaonable (plan改成plans) for your study and work. (On改成At) the same time, don't lose heart if your dream (failed改成fails) to be realized. Perhaps you should adjust your next plan and make a new dream. Go on (work改成working) hard, and you will succeed in realizing your dream in time.

Answer 2

Everyone had (改为has) his own dreams ,and everyone want(改为wants) to turn it （改为them）into realities(改为reality).Therefore,dreams are so important in everyone's life that
everyone should hold fastl (改为fast) to them .Furthermore ,some people will
fail in their work or study and even in their life.In order to make your
dreams to （去掉to）come ture,you'd better make reaonable plan (改为plans) for your study
and work .On (改为In )the same time ,don't lose heart (加上even)if your dream failed to be
realized.Perhaps you should adjust your next plan and make a new
dream.Go on work (改为working) hard,and you will succeed in realizing your deram in time.本回答被网友采纳

Answer 3

楼上的答案不错