可以说写的一塌糊涂……通篇语法错误，词性用错，缺少介词，中式英语，这个应该只能拿到很低的分了
按你的东西写了一个例子，你照着看看（我这里面细节没加很多，比如活动内容我没写什么具体的。语法啥的不要错，再加上细节分才会高）
Dear Professor Gorden,
I am Li Ming and I will graduate soon. I am glad to invite you to take part in my graduation ceremony. There are foods and drinks available. Before we enjoy foods and drinks, professors deliver speeches. I think you are the best person to do the speech for us because you are knowledgeable and well-experienced. I do really appreciate if you can come to join us and to be the speaker. The ceremony will be hosted in our classroom and in the afternoon of next Sunday. I hope you could take my invitation and come to join this special event, which means a lot to me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Li Ming
按你的东西写了一个例子，你照着看看（我这里面细节没加很多，比如活动内容我没写什么具体的。语法啥的不要错，再加上细节分才会高）
Dear Professor Gorden,
I am Li Ming and I will graduate soon. I am glad to invite you to take part in my graduation ceremony. There are foods and drinks available. Before we enjoy foods and drinks, professors deliver speeches. I think you are the best person to do the speech for us because you are knowledgeable and well-experienced. I do really appreciate if you can come to join us and to be the speaker. The ceremony will be hosted in our classroom and in the afternoon of next Sunday. I hope you could take my invitation and come to join this special event, which means a lot to me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Li Ming
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第1个回答 2019-05-14
want加名词或者不定式to do
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