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写作思路:根据题目要求,可以以生活中某个相关事情作为主题,最后总结自己的感受。
Today is international labor day.
今天是五一国际劳动节。
My mom and dad and I went to the park for a picnic, and then went to visit my grandparents.
我妈妈爸爸和我去公园野餐,然后去拜访我的爷爷奶奶。
At nine o'clock in the morning, we went to the park for a picnic. We brought juice, cornflakes, apples, oranges, lollipops, bananas, ice cream, mangoes and so on.
早上九点钟,我们去公园野餐,我们带汁、玉米片、苹果、桔子、棒棒糖、香蕉、冰淇淋、芒果等等。
I also put toys, such as dolls, balls, balloons, skateboards and kites.
我也把玩具,如娃娃、球、气球、滑板和风筝。
At two o'clock in the afternoon, we went to visit my grandparents.
在下午两点钟的时候,我们去拜访我的爷爷奶奶。
I help my grandfather do some housework. My sister and I play skateboarding and dolls.
我帮爷爷做一些家务。我妹妹和我玩滑板和洋娃娃。
We went home at 8 o'clock, played computer games for two hours, and then went to bed.
8点钟我们就回家了,玩了两个小时电脑游戏,然后上床睡觉。
I'm very happy today!
今天我很高兴!
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