求高人翻译一篇<傲慢与偏见>读后感1,共两段,每段200分

要求:六级水平,语言不必太华丽;书中英文人物名称正确翻译

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总共两段,英文总字数800-1000

《傲慢与偏见》是简.奥斯汀的代表作。读来整部作品没有滂沱的气势,没有曲折跌宕的情节,但就是这种简单、精致深深地吸引了我.
小说中的男主人公达西是一名表面傲慢,其实心地善良的年轻人,生于富贵之家,优越的环境令他对自己的傲慢浑然不觉;女主角伊莉莎白则是一名聪明而心思缜密的人,但却太执着于第一印象,自恃观察力过人而身陷偏见的迷宫。达西对伊莉莎白一见钟情但各自的傲慢与偏见却令两人出现一连串的误会。达西在出乎伊莉莎白意料之外的况下向她表白自己的爱意,但在求婚时却又说明他们两家的门第不等,气得伊莉莎白以是要羞辱她而拒绝……然而,达西最终还是让伊莉莎白看到他的善良可爱之处,改变对他的偏见,而他也改变了自己的傲慢。
故事所反映的是贵族爱情婚姻故事,但是其中所渗透的婚姻道德观念在今天仍有现实意义。奥斯汀在这部小说中通过班纳特五个女儿对待终身大事的不同处理,反映了本人的婚姻观:为了财产、金钱和地位而结婚是错误的;而结婚不考虑上述因素也是愚蠢的。因此,她既反对为金钱而结婚,也反对把婚姻当儿戏。她强调理想婚姻的重要性,并把男女双方感情作为缔结理想婚姻的基石。
这是第一段,翻译成400-500字.第二段稍后发出,要求相同,也是200分

机器翻译要加上修改,语法要正确

《傲慢与偏见》是简.奥斯汀的代表作。读来整部作品没有滂沱的气势,没有曲折跌宕的情节,但就是这种简单、精致深深地吸引了我.
Pride and Prejudice is the most famous of Jane Austen’s novels. The whole book is without any overwhelming effects and the plot has no intricate details, but still I really get lost in this simple but exquisite story.

小说中的男主人公达西是一名表面傲慢,其实心地善良的年轻人,生于富贵之家,优越的环境令他对自己的傲慢浑然不觉;女主角伊莉莎白则是一名聪明而心思缜密的人,但却太执着于第一印象,自恃观察力过人而身陷偏见的迷宫。达西对伊莉莎白一见钟情但各自的傲慢与偏见却令两人出现一连串的误会。达西在出乎伊莉莎白意料之外的况下向她表白自己的爱意,但在求婚时却又说明他们两家的门第不等,气得伊莉莎白以是要羞辱她而拒绝……然而,达西最终还是让伊莉莎白看到他的善良可爱之处,改变对他的偏见,而他也改变了自己的傲慢。
The central male character of the novel, Darcy, who often appears haughty or proud outwardly but possesses an honest and kind nature underneath, is a member of a wealthy family and the easy circumstances in life make him oblivious to his arrogance. The female protagonist, Elizabeth Bennet, is an intelligent woman with a thoughtful cast of mind, she is so stuck in first impression, and so self-assured for having excellent powers of observation that she finds herself in a fine pass due to her prejudice. Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth at first sight, but their pride and prejudice have led to a series of misunderstanding between them. In a surprising manner Darcy declares his love to Elizabeth, and expresses his desire to marry her in spite of her objectionable family; feeling insulted and furious, Elizabeth refuses him in no uncertain terms……however, Darcy finally manages to let her see his kind and loving nature, and persuade her to reconsider her opinion of him while he himself has also changed his arrogant attitude.

故事所反映的是贵族爱情婚姻故事,但是其中所渗透的婚姻道德观念在今天仍有现实意义。奥斯汀在这部小说中通过班纳特五个女儿对待终身大事的不同处理,反映了本人的婚姻观:为了财产、金钱和地位而结婚是错误的;而结婚不考虑上述因素也是愚蠢的。因此,她既反对为金钱而结婚,也反对把婚姻当儿戏。她强调理想婚姻的重要性,并把男女双方感情作为缔结理想婚姻的基石。
The story is about love and marriage of aristocrats, but the concept of morality of marriage still has a practical significance today. Jane Austen reflected her perspective in marriage through the different marriage approaches of Mr. Bennet’s five daughters; it’s wrong to marry for the purpose of property, money and social status, but it’s also stupid to marry without considering these factors. So, she did not condone marry for money, as well as loveless marriages. She emphasized the importance of ideal marriages, and the mutual affections of couples are depicted as a foundation for a good marriage.

注:1. 我不赞同‘达西对伊莉莎白一见钟情’的说法; 因为一开始宾利建议达西去邀请伊丽莎白跳舞时,达西拒绝了,而且还傲慢地说,她的美貌还不够格吸引他。伊丽莎白无意中听到了,因此对达西的第一印象坏透了,并对他产生极强的偏见!

2. 滂沱的气势是否是磅礴的气势的笔误?翻译软件都译成下大雨了。
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第1个回答  2010-01-06
Darcy, the male protagonist in the novel is a surface of arrogance, in fact, good-hearted young man, was born in rich homes, excellent environment, made him oblivious to his own arrogance; actress Elizabeth is a smart careful and attentive to people, but being too inflexible on the first impression count on extraordinary powers of observation, which puts a maze of prejudice. Darcy's love at first sight of Elizabeth, but their pride and prejudice They reckon there a series of misunderstandings. Elizabeth Darcy in the unexpected situation beyond the next to declare their love to her, but marry him but when the door of the first two shows that they range from
Take the present to humiliate her anger Elizabeth refused to ... ... However, Darcy finally let Elizabeth see the good thing about his change of prejudice against him, and he also changed his own arrogance.
Stories reflect the noble story of love and marriage, but one of the penetration of marriages in today's moral values are still relevant. Austin novel five Bennet daughters through marriage is to treat the difference in treatment reflects my views on marriage: In order to property, money and status of marriage is wrong; the marriage does not take into account the factors mentioned above is also foolish. Therefore, she not only opposed to marry for money, but also opposed to the marriage, child's play. She stressed the importance of an ideal marriage, and to the feelings of both men and women as the cornerstone of the conclusion of an ideal marriage.
第2个回答  2010-01-06
"Pride and prejudice" is Jane Austen masterpiece. Read the whole work of momentum, which reflects the plot twists and turns not, but this is simple and delicate deeply attracted me.
The hero of a novel darcy is a surface arrogance,the young man is actually kind-hearted,in a silver spoon,superior environment makes him for his arrogance blissfully unaware;Actress Elizabeth is a clever idea, but the meticulous,but too attached to the first impression,Self-reliant and observation which maze of prejudice.Darcy to Elizabeth love at first sight, but their pride and prejudice have two appear a series of misunderstanding.Darcy behaviour in Elizabeth unexpected condition to her own love,but when proposing actually also explains they two family statuses different,anger is to expose her to Elizabeth refused to... however,west reaches lets Elizabeth see his good lovable place finally,to change his prejudice,and he changed his arrogance.
The story reflects a noble marriage story,the marriage morality but seeps still had the practical significance in today.Austin treats lifelong important matter's different processing in this novel through the class Nutter five daughters,Reflects my marriage:For the property, the money and the status marry are wrong;But marries did not consider that the above factor is also stupid.Therefore, she opposes marry for money, also opposes the marriage lightly.She stressed the importance of an ideal marriage, and concluded the feelings of both men and women as the cornerstone of an ideal marriage.
第3个回答  2010-01-06
译文(역문):

<오만과편견>은 간.오스팅의 대표작이다.작품의 전부를 읽어보면 유일한하게 보이는 기세가없으면 곡절부침의 정절도 없다.그러나 바로 이런 간단하고 절묘한 것들이 나를 깊이 흡인하게하였다.
소설중 남자 주인공 공달서는 표면은 오만하나 기실 마음은 선량한 절은이면 부유한 가정에서 태여나 우월한 환경은 그로 하여금 자신의오만에 대해 전여 감촉하지 못하게하였다.녀자 주요역 엘리자베스은 총명하고 진밀한사람이다.그러나 그는 첫인상에 너무나 신경써서 과분한 관찰력으로하여 편견의 미궁에 빠들어 지게된다.서달은 엘리자베스를 첫눈에 마음들었으나 각자의 오만과 편견으로하여 그들 두사람에게 오해들이 있따라 출현한다.달서는 엘리자베스의 생각도못해본 정환에서 그에게 사랑의 이미을 고백한다.그러나 혼인을 청구할때는 또 두집이 문툭이 같이않다등을 말하여 엘리자베스은 자신에대한 모욕이라고 거절한다... ...그리하여 달서는 최종 엘리자베스에게 자신이 선량과가장 사랑할봐있는 사람이라는겄을 알아보게 하여 그에게 대한 편견을 개변하게하고 그자신도 자기의 오만을 개변하였다.
서설반영한것은 귀족들이 사랑혼인 이야기이다.그러나 그속에 침투되여있는 혼인 도덕관념은 오를까지도 현실적인 의이가있다.오스팅은 이소설에서 반나특의 다섯 딸의 총신대사에대한 각다른 처리를 통해 자신의 혼인관을 반영하였다:재물 금전과직위를 위한 결혼은 착오이며 또결혼에서 우에서 말한것들을 고려하지 않아도 바보이다.그러무로 그는 금전을 위해 결혼하는것을 반대하고 혼인을 장난으로 여기는것도 반대했다.그는 리상적인 혼인이 중요성과 남여 쌍방의 감정을 리상적인 혼인의 기석으로 하여 결혼하는 것을 강조했다.

英文:
The pride and prejudice (Jean vintagebach. aoustin. Read the whole piece is not the only one of the ups and downs, without twists and turns of the plot, but it is this simple, refined appealed to me.
The hero of the novel is a surface Darcy haughtyof, in fact, clver potentian, born with a silver spoon, position and he didn't seem to mind his own arrogance; actress Elizabeth, before I knew it was a clever but his mind was a meticulosity, but only to the first impression, has shown excellent courage and strictures at students'ability in the labyrinth of prejudice. Darcy on Elizabeth, love at first sight but their pride and prejudice that the two men appear in a series of misunderstandings. Darcy in the contrary to Elizabeth, unexpected circumstances to his lovetill, but the marriage being their first two door, was so angry that Elizabeth to is to humiliate her to refuse but Darcy ultimately let Elizabeth saw him kindness, change the prejudices of him and he has changed his arrogance.
The story was that the story as a noble love and marriage, but the permeatin marriage moral values today still have practical significance. Austinhigh in the novel in five daughters by bannat treattheir of trassica, the most important event reflects my views of marriage: for the sake of property, money and status of marriage is wrong; marriage does not take into account the above factors are thinkabouthow. As a result, she is opposed to marry for money, but also against the marriage Bill. She stressed the importance of an ideal marriage, and to include both feelings as the cornerstone of an ideal marriage was entered into.
第4个回答  2010-01-06
"Pride and Prejudice" is Jane. Austen's masterpiece. To read momentum torrential whole work is not without ups and twists and turns of the plot, but it is this simple, elegant deeply attracted me.
Darcy, the male protagonist in the novel is a surface of arrogance, in fact, good-hearted young man, was born in rich homes, excellent environment, made him oblivious to his own arrogance; actress Elizabeth is a smart careful and attentive to people, but being too inflexible on the first impression count on extraordinary powers of observation, which puts a maze of prejudice. Darcy's love at first sight of Elizabeth, but their pride and prejudice They reckon there a series of misunderstandings. Elizabeth Darcy in the unexpected situation beyond the next to declare their love to her, but marry him but when the door of the first two shows that they range from anger to shame her Elizabeth Take the present refused to ... ... However, Darcy finally let Elizabeth see the good thing about his change of prejudice against him, and he also changed his own arrogance.
Stories reflect the noble story of love and marriage, but the penetration of marriages in which the moral values in today's still relevant. Austin novel five Bennet daughters through marriage is to treat the difference in treatment reflects my views on marriage: In order to property, money and status of marriage is wrong; the marriage does not take into account the factors mentioned above is also foolish. Therefore, she not only opposed to marry for money, but also opposed to the marriage, child's play. She stressed the importance of an ideal marriage, and to the feelings of both men and women as the cornerstone of the conclusion of an ideal marriage.
我用的是翻译软件,没看,应该有中国式英语。
注意一下,用正确语法
第二段呢?

参考资料:翻译软件

第5个回答  2010-01-06
"Pride and Prejudice" is Jane. Austen's masterpiece. To read momentum torrential whole work is not without ups and twists and turns of the plot, but it is this simple, elegant deeply attracted me.
Darcy, the male protagonist in the novel is a surface of arrogance, in fact, good-hearted young man, was born in rich homes, excellent environment, made him oblivious to his own arrogance; actress Elizabeth is a smart careful and attentive to people, but being too inflexible on the first impression count on extraordinary powers of observation, which puts a maze of prejudice. Darcy's love at first sight of Elizabeth, but their pride and prejudice They reckon there a series of misunderstandings. Elizabeth Darcy in the unexpected situation beyond the next to declare their love to her, but marry him but when the door of the first two shows that they range from
Take the present to humiliate her anger Elizabeth refused to ... ... However, Darcy finally let Elizabeth see the good thing about his change of prejudice against him, and he also changed his own arrogance.
Stories reflect the noble story of love and marriage, but one of the penetration of marriages in today's moral values are still relevant. Austin novel five Bennet daughters through marriage is to treat the difference in treatment reflects my views on marriage: In order to property, money and status of marriage is wrong; the marriage does not take into account the factors mentioned above is also foolish. Therefore, she not only opposed to marry for money, but also opposed to the marriage, child's play. She stressed the importance of an ideal marriage, and to the feelings of both men and women as the cornerstone of the conclusion of an ideal marriage. 给我分
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