My Winter Holiday
On my Winter Holiday,did you know what i do ?First,i help my mom did some chores,like did the laundry,took out the trash ,swept the floor...Second,we family went to the aquarium, i saw some interesting seals, octopus, and sea lion. Then,we went to the Animal World ,there are very interesting .I like there. I favorite animal is panda ,because it's very cute. So, on my Winter Holiday, i feel very happy.
请帮我指出错处,并加以改正,告诉我为什么错,谢谢!!
真的非常谢谢大家。
Thanks very much!