英语作文这句话我写的对吗

Question

I read Pride and Prejudice written by a well-known English writer called Jane Austen this summer.

“this summer”应该放在那里呢？是放在I read Pride and Prejudice后面，还是向原句一样，
这句话还有什么语法问题吗，谢谢大家了！！

Answer 1

您好！放在开头。
开头的句子比较长，this summer 又比较短，为了避免头重脚轻，放在开头比放在最后面要好得多，说明了事情发生的时间。
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Answer 2

这样写也行，不过最好是把this summer 放到句首比较符合英国人用语习惯，另外楼上提到的had read 可改可不改，毕竟这一个句子没有很明确地表达主语是已经过完了this summer

Answer 3

写成这样比较好：This summer, I read the novel Pride and Prejudice which is written by a well-known English writer, whose name is Jane Austen.

this summer 是时间状语，随便放哪里就好的。

Answer 4

I read Pride and Prejudice written by a well-known English writer Jane Austen this summer.
这样比较好， 放在前面也行！

Answer 5

我觉得可以放在句首： This summer holiday, I had read...