一篇很短的英语自我介绍，请大家帮我纠正一下语法错误，谢谢！！

Question

good afternoon~！
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview, I will introduce myself briefly,i am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province ,a beautiful place of china,and i am still a sophomore student at Sichuan University Jinjiang College，my major is Environmental Art. I spend most of my time on study, i have acquired many knowledge of my major during my school time. And the School’S scholarships returned My efforts。
I think i may be a Creative thinker，when I was stady in Kindergarten,a Magazine had published my idea, so I always believe I would be a good designer。
Always something fresh can attract my attentionl, new environment ,new product , maybe we’ll meet some problems near by, but if we keep on learning new knowledge, nothing is impossible~!
France is a Famous city for romantic and artistic, as other designers, France is deeply attracted to me, If I had the opportunity to go there, I think my design capability can be Greatly improved.
Time is tightm, wish my confession will give you a good impression,thank you!

可以直接在下面回复。。最好发百度短信给我。。谢谢 急用、！！

Answer 1

Good afternoon， ladies and gentlemen~！

It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview. I will introduce myself briefly. I am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province , which is a beautiful place in china, and i am still a sophomore at Sichuan University Jinjiang College. My major is Environmental Art. I spent most of my time studying and have acquired most of the knowledge of my major during school time, and the scholarships returned My efforts。

I think i am a Creative guy since Kindergarten,and had published an idea in Magazine. I always believe I could be a good designer。

Always, I'm attracted by something fresh, like new environment ,new product. Maybe I'll meet some problems in the near future, but nothing is impossible only if we keep on learning~!

France is a Famous country for its romantic and artistic culture. As other designers, France is also attractive to me. If I had the opportunity to be there, I think my design capability will be greatly improved.

Thank you for your attention!

最后的confession就免了吧……

Answer 2

It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview——a 改成an

i am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province ,a beautiful place of china,——最好改成（外国人是不是都不打透露年龄的啊）
I am 20 years old and born in Sichuan which is a beautiful province in China。

i am still a sophomore student at Sichuan University Jinjiang College，my major is Environmental Art.——a sophomore student 要将student去掉

I spend most of my time on study, i have acquired many knowledge of my major during my school time. And the School’S scholarships returned My efforts。——缺少连接词 I spend most of my time on study, so I have acquired many knowledge of my major。

I think i may be a Creative thinker，when I was stady in Kindergarten,a Magazine had published my idea, so I always believe I would be a good designer。——I think I am a Creative thinker。when I was in Kindergarten,a Magazine had published my idea。I have always believed I would be a good designer。

Always something fresh can attract my attentionl,——Anything fresh always attracts my attention。

Answer 3

g(大写)ood afternoon~！
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview,(句号) I will introduce myself briefly,i(大写) am 20 years old,(was)born in Sichuan province ,a beautiful place of c(!!!)hina,and i(大) am still a sophomore student at Sichuan University Jinjiang College，(句号)my major is Environmental Art. I spend most of my time on study, i(大) have acquired many knowledge of my major during my school time. And the S(小)chool’S(小) scholarships returned My efforts。(半角)
I think i(大) may be a C(小)reative thinker，(句号)when I was stady(......) in Kindergarten,a Magazine(有点别扭) had published my idea, so I always believe I would be a good designer。
Always(A改小弄到can后) s(大)omething fresh can attract my attentionl, new environment ,new product ,(句) maybe we’ll meet some problems near by, but if we keep on learning new knowledge, nothing is(改成will be) impossible~!
France is a Famous city(!!!) for romantic and artistic,(句)a(大)s other designers, France is(去)deeply attracted to(去) me, If I had the opportunity to go there, I think(别扭) my design capability can be Greatly improved.
Time is tightm(?), wish my confession will give you a good impression,thank you!

一楼误导人，正确的应该是 spend sth + in doing sth/on sth

参考资料：一高一学生的意见.

Answer 4

It is really my pleasure to get this opportunity to give an brief self-introduction. I am a 20 years boy/girl. Sichuan is my hometown, it is extremely beatiful. I am a sophomore of Sichuan University Jinjiang College. Environmental Art is my major.
Assiduity and honesty are my characters. I got the scholarships for this. Also,I am so open-minded that I always have creative ideas.When I was study in Kindergarten,a Magazine published my idea, so I believed I would be a good designer.
Always something fresh can attract my attentionl, new environment ,new product , maybe we’ll meet some problems near by, but if we keep on learning new knowledge, nothing is impossible~!
France is a Famous city for romantic and artistic, as other designers, France is deeply attracted to me, If I had the opportunity to go there, I think my design capability can be Greatly improved.
Time is tightm, wish my confession will give you a good impression,thank you!

Answer 5

It is really my honor to have this opportunity for the interview
i have acquired much knowledge
France is a Famous country
先来这些吧 基本没什么大问题 就算是外国人也有口误 就重要说的时候一定要流畅 表现的自然了 有点瑕疵是无碍的

Answer 6

所有的i大写!spend on studying