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When I go to school in the first day, my parents drive me to school, then they walk me to the classroom, they tell me that they will go away and I feel lonely, I try not to cry, though I want to cry in my heart.
当我第一天去学校的时候,我的父母开车送我到学校,然后他们陪我到教室,告诉我他们要走了,我感到孤单,尝试着不去哭,虽然我心里面想哭出来。
But soon I make new friends and forget about the unhappiness, we play together and become good friends.
但是很快我就结交了新的朋友,忘记了不愉快,我们一起玩耍,成为了好朋友