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I go to Liulang Mingde Primary School, which is near my home. It is very big and has more than sixty teachers. Among them, MY favorite is my Chinese teacher - Miss Chen.
Mr. Chen was of medium height, with a pair of glasses perched on the bridge of his high nose. He looked gentle and friendly, full of kindness. Don't think the teacher will be easy on us. She is very strict with us. In spite of this, students still like her very much, because she is like a mother to take care of us.
Remember when the first grade, our class Zhang Xiaolin in the morning after school, while the third grade two class students are not, picked up his ball to the playground to play. When the owner of the ball found out, he was furious.
What started as a trivial matter turned into a fight. Zhang Xiaolin's lunch box was also thrown on the ground, spilling food all over the floor. After teacher Chen knew, immediately let me take two students to the office.
Asked the cause of the matter, kindly said to them: "we live in the school of this big family, should understand each other, help each other, have the courage to admit mistakes, so you can be small, small, there will not be so serious consequences, you say that is the truth?"
Both men were convinced and admitted their mistakes to each other sincerely. At this time, Teacher Li took out 5 dollars, said to Zhang Xiaolin: "go to buy lunch box, don't be hungry."
I have a bad stomach and often have stomachaches. One day, my stomach hurt again, lying on the table, face pale. Chen teacher see me so, know I have a stomachache, quickly called a classmate to help me to the health room.
Unfortunately, the school doctor on duty asked for leave, AND I had to cover the stomach back to the classroom. See this scene.
Teacher Chen hurried to take me to the office, poured a glass of water for me to drink, but I immediately threw up. There was no way, Mr. Chen had to call grandma to pick me up.
When waiting for grandma, Miss Chen patted me on the back, while anxiously looking at the watch, after a long time, still did not see grandma, Miss Li said: "Forget it, there is still some time to go to class, I will send you home!" "And she helped me home.
On the way, TEARS filled my eyes. I secretly determined: in the future, I also want to be a teacher, like Mr Chen not only teach students knowledge, but also to care about them with their own love.
我在六郎明德小学上学,学校在我家附近,很大,有着六十多位老师。其中,我最喜欢的是我的语文老师——陈老师。
陈老师中等身材,高高的鼻梁上架着一副眼镜,看上去又斯文又和气,充满慈爱。你可别以为老师会对我们很松懈,老师对我们可严格了。尽管这样,同学们还是很喜欢她,因为她像妈妈那样呵护着我们。
记得一年级的时候,我们班的张晓林在上午放学后,趁三年级二班的同学不在,拿起他的球到操场上玩起来。球的主人知道后,大发雷霆。
本来鸡毛蒜皮的小事变成了“武打大战”。张晓林的饭盒也被扔到了地上,饭菜洒了一地。陈老师知道后,立马让我带两位同学到办公室。
问清了事情的起因,和蔼地对他们说:“我们生活在学校这个大家庭里,应该互相谅解、互相帮助,有了错误应勇于认错,这样就可以大事化小,小事化了,也就不会出现这么严重的后果了,你们说是这个道理吗?”
两人心服口服,都向对方诚恳地承认了错误。这时,李老师拿出5块钱,对张晓林说:“快去买盒饭吧,别饿坏了肚子。”
我的肠胃不好,经常肚子痛。有一天,我的肚子又痛了,趴在桌子上,脸色苍白。陈老师见我那样,知道我又闹肚子痛了,赶快叫一位同学扶我到卫生室。
不巧,当班的校医请假了,我只好又捂着肚子回到教室。见此情景,陈老师赶紧带我到办公室,倒了杯水给我喝,可我马上吐了出来。没办法,陈老师只好打电话让姥姥来接我。
在等姥姥的时候,陈老师一边拍着我的背,一边焦急地看看手表,过了好久,还不见姥姥来,李老师说:“算了,离上课还有一段时间,我送你回家吧!”说着搀护着我回家了。
半路上,我止不住热泪满眶。我暗暗下定决心:将来,我也要做一名老师,像陈老师那样不但教学生知识,更要用自己的爱心去关心他们。