室友太吵让我很烦的英语作文

如题所述

本次作文属于新材料作文。
材料是一首短诗,共四句,短小精悍,寓意浅显明了,诗歌中的物象是镜子。说得是镜子,一辈子只照别人,就是没有照见自己,直到有一天,偶遇另一面镜子,才看见了自己的真面目。
首先,通过关键语句,把握材料的感情倾向。
“照了一辈子人”“没有照见自己”“看见自己的真面目”单看前两个短语,似乎还有赞镜子无私奉献之意,如红烛如春蚕,但后一句最关键,定基调,结合三句,诗歌意在批评镜子只能鉴人,不能鉴己;只能明察秋毫别人的得失,却看不到自己的庐山真面;只能知人,不能知己。
另外,还有关联词,“就是”“才”也可以作为佐证。表明诗歌的感情基调是深深的惋惜,是浅浅的责备,是淡淡的批评。由物及人,诗歌意在告诫我们:不但要知彼,更要知己。要认清自己,不但要知人,更要察己,不但要全面准确地了解别人,更要客观公正地评价自己。要为自己准备一面“镜子”。
这也是作文的立意,当然还可以化大为小,从如何认清自己入手,如材料找另一面镜子,论述“以人为镜,看清自己”。这里的人,可以指大众,可以指领袖精英榜样。可以从大众身上看到人类的劣根性,人性的丑陋,从而反省自己丑陋的一面;也可以以领袖、榜样楷模为高标,感知差距,寻找自身的不足,对自己有一个准确的定位,具体说,“以人为镜”中的人,可以指是与自己密切相关的诤友、知音、爱人、师长、同事、邻里,也可以是素昧平生,萍水相逢之人,甚至可以是对手。
还可以史为镜,前车之鉴,前事不忘,后事之师。吸取教训,认清自己,不让悲剧重演。如毛泽东“不可沽名学霸王”。
当然,要认清自己,不一定非得借助外在的“人”“史”“物”,还可以为自己准备一面心镜,即“反躬自省”“三省其身”,时时开展自我批评。
因此,本次作文可以从以下几个方面立意:
1、 知人更要知己。辩证地谈,前者作铺垫,着重论述后者。
2、 以人为镜,看清自己
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第1个回答  2015-12-28
Dear housparent:
It has been half a year since I began to live in this domitory and it was amazing that I live with Luis,who lead a really passionate life that however was intoleratable for me,who likes to study quietly and for whom such passions are just noise.It is annoying,no?It occurs frequently that each time I was ready for a sleep but he brought in many of his friends to make a party,what happens next:singing,dancing,drinking and so on.I can hardly endure all these behaviors and reluctantly,I have spoken to him about this problem.Whereas the case proved that I was finally ignored.I need a space to study and maybe no longer could I stand such a noisy life.Therefore,I require you,our administrator to permit me another domitory.I do hope you could understand me and help me to solve this problem.
Thanks.
Yours Sincerely
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