这是我写的雅思大作文，第一次写，谁能帮我看看大致分数改改错提提意见，谢谢。刚开始很迷茫请问大家的作

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这是我写的雅思大作文，第一次写，谁能帮我看看大致分数改改错提提意见，谢谢。刚开始很迷茫请问大家的作文都是找谁改的

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1. 文化传统类
　　 Some people think that culture traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed to tourists. Others believe that it is the only way that traditions can be remained in the world. Discuss both and give your opinion.
　　 2. 青少年犯罪问题
　　 Recent figures of crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the possible reasons and how to solve it?
　　 3. 教育类(1)
　　 In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but others think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. Discuss and give your opinion.
　　 4. 科技类
　　 Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?
　　 5.国家政策类
　　 Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people think it’s not government’s responsibility. Discuss both and give your opinion.
　　 6. 社会问题
　　 Many people think that public libraries should only provide books to readers and shouldn’t waste their limited funds on expensive high-tech media, such as computer software, DVD or videos. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
　　 7. 教育类(2)
　　 Some teachers say students should be organized into group study. Others argue that students should be made to study alone. What’s your opinion?
　　 8.冷门题(1)
　　 Food can be cheaper if we use improved facilities and better machinery . However, some of the methods may be dangerous for human health, and have negative effects on local community. What’s your opinion?