My Computer
A decade ago, my father spent $1,350 to buy a computer for me. His objective was to help me learn how to operate it. At that time, my monitor was heavier, and the CPU speed was very slow.Besides that, the hard disk space was only 4GB, 64MB of RAM, and a modem speed of56KB.
Today, my computer is an Apple all in one. Its weight is notheavy. So it is easy to carry. Its screen is big. Looking at the screen is verycomfortable.
It is a perfect product. Apple is oneof my favorite brands! It was my last year in Hong Kong to buy somethingbecause prices in Hong Kong were over ¥1000 cheaper than China.
A decade ago, my father spent $1350 tobuy a computer. His object was let me learn how to operate it. At thetime when, my monitor was more heavy. And CPU speed was very slow. Besides harddisk space only 4GB, memory was 64MB, modem speed was 56KB.
Today, my computer is an Apple all in one. Its weight is notheavy. and easy to carry. Its screen is big, looking at the screen very comfortable.It is a perfect product. Apple is one of my favorite brands! It was my lastyear in Hong Kong to buy because prices in Hong Kong 2 over one thousand RMBcheaper than China.
Teacher: why is this so small?
Focus better, why is the order of yourwriting off?
Edit yourself better, organize yourparagraphs better.