ls翻译都挺好的，弱弱地说，哥们儿你哪儿找的英文啊？错误有点多啊，感觉应该是自己的孩子写的？要是有正经用途的最好先修正一下吧。
They go on vacation?They went to Hong Kong.
---他们去度假了？（问题1：不是正确的疑问句语序，Did they go on a vacation？）
---他们去了香港。
They buy your stuff?No, because they didn't have enough money, so didn't buy anything.
---他们买了你的东西？（问题2：同1；问题3：这不应该是过去时么？Did they buy your stuff？）
---没，因为他们钱不够，所以就什么也没买。（问题4：because和so不能同时出现，so的半句少主语they。No. They didn't buy anything because they didn't have enough money.）
Which man?Everyone is very friendly.
---哪个人？
---每个人都很友好。（问题5：答非所问）
She decided to try ice skating.
她决定试试滑冰。
No one seems to feel hungry.
看起来没人觉得饿。（问题6：直接把to feel删掉更地道）
Due to the bad weather, we didn't go to tiananmen square.
天气太糟了，所以我们没去天安门广场。（问题7：地名要大写 Tian‘anmen Square）
Mark usually do in your spare time?He always help my mother do the housework.
---在没事的时候，Mark（马克）通常会干点什么？（问题8：同1；Mark要用三单。What does Mark usually do in his spare time?）
---他总是帮我妈妈做家务。（问题9：三单；help sb. with sth.或help sb. to do sth.。He always helps my mother with the housework.）
How long does your mother have a coffee?She seldom drink coffee.
---你妈妈多长时间喝一次咖啡？（问题10：问频率不用How long，用How often；have coffee没有a）
---她很少喝咖啡。（问题11：三单 drinks）
30% of the students surfing the Internet at least 3 or 4 times a week.
这些学生中的三成每周至少上网3-4次。（问题12：surfing导致没有谓语，改为surfs）
Although milk is good for your health, but I never and.
尽管牛奶有益健康，可我从没喝过。（问题13：Although but不能同时出现；your和I自相矛盾，and-和 应改 为had any-喝过任何。Milk is good for our health, but I never had any.）
Jack exercise three to five times a week.He is more healthy than I.
Jack（杰克）每周锻炼3-5 次。他比我更健康。（问题14：三单；缺动词；healthy的比较级直接变ier不用加more；than后面应加宾语me。Jack does excercise 3 to 5 times a week. He is healthier than me.）
You get up as early and your mother?No, my mother got up earlier than me.
---你和你妈妈起得一样早？（问题15：根据回答，应为过去时；同1；as... as而不是as... and。Did you get up as early as your mother?）
---不，我妈妈起得比我早。
Binzhou and Qingdao, which city?Qingdao is much bigger than binzhou.
---滨州和青岛，哪个城市？（问题16：不完整；and和 改为 or或者。Which city is bigger, Binzhou or Qingdao？）
---青岛比滨州大得多。
The magazine is interesting than that.
这本杂志比那本又去。（问题17：这This更好；than前面应为比较级；that one 更好。This magazine is more interesting than that one.）
My best friend and I was very different.She outgoing than me, and I than her diligence.
我和我最好的朋友很不一样。她比我外向，我比她用功。（问题18：两个人是复数，描述死人才用过去时，was改为are；than前比较级；少be动词；diligence是名词。整个句子很别扭，不好意思得整个改。My best friend is very different with me. She is more outgoing than me, but I study harder than her.）
Both Tina and tara have short hair, but Tina thinner than tara.
Tina(缇娜)和Tara（塔拉）都长着短发，但是Tina比Tara更瘦。（问题19：少be动词。thinner前加一个is）
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