这是我写的英语读后感 请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误 谢谢

Question

这是我写的英语读后感 请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误 谢谢

Reading after The Wonderful Wizard of Oz

There was a girl called Dorothy and she is a lovely girl with long red hair. Because of a cyclone, she started her interesting adventures with her dog Toto. She made friends with a tin man, a scarecrow and a lion. Her friends had different weak points. The lion is a coward, the scarecrow is not clever and the tin man had no heart. But Dorothy helped them and at last, they goteverything they want . The story is exciting, and I like Dorothy best. Because she is brave . She was not afraid of the lion. Though the lion is much bigger and stronger than her. I think she is also kind. She was kind to everyone around her, especially her friends. That’s the reason why they can get what they want at last. All of their dreams came true and they were very happy. They tried their best to help each other in the way to the Emerald City. It’s a happy ending and I think Dorothy and her friend will never forget the experiences. So do I.

Answer 1

Thoughts after reading The Wonderful Wizard of
There was a girl called Dorothy.she was a lovely girl with long red hair. Because of a cyclone, she started her interesting adventures with her dog Toto. She made friends with a tin man, a scarecrow and a lion. Her friends had different weak points. The lion is a coward, the scarecrow is not clever and the tin man had no heart. But Dorothy helped them and at last, they got everything they want . The story is exciting, and I enjoyed it very much,especially for Dorothy best. Because she so brave that she was not afraid of the lion, though the lion was much bigger and stronger than her. I think she is also kind. She was kind to everyone around her, especially her friends. That’s the reason why they can get what they really wanted at last. All their dreams came true at last.It's a happy ending. The progress is also impressed me a lot.They tried their best to help each other in the way to the Emerald City. Thanks to the final reault, in my own point of view, Dorothy and her friend would never forget the experiences. So will I.
很辛苦，注:叙事应用过去时，评论（中肯）应用现在的时态。还有多用复句和好的词组，上下文注意衔接，我也只能改成这样。很喜欢你的概括部分，言简意赅。

Answer 2

pay attention to your tense.

Answer 3

没有什么语法错误.写的很像小学生的作文,因为句式简单,但是风格很可爱.我挺喜欢的.

Answer 4

第一句中with用的不大对吧！