英语写作问题，我的文章有语法错误吗？怎么可以写得好点（本人是初中

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英语写作问题，我的文章有语法错误吗？怎么可以写得好点（本人是初中）

Answer 1

语法错误太多了，就不一一说了，给你修改了：
Today I interviewed one of my classmates.
His name is James and he is from China, Guangdong. Although he told me that he didn't want to brag, but still, he said that he found himself very handsome and tall. He's 17 years old with brown hair. He also has a brother whose name is Ben. They often play basketball and swim together.
About James's parents, his dad owns a shop so he usually goes help him on his free time. And his mom is a housewife who likes to cook for them.