Voiceover: long long ago, in this frosty winter, there was a poor, pathetic beggar who was freezingly cold, thirsty and starving. <Enter the beggar in a worn out coat with a cane>. He came to a village, where he encountered a rich kid and a poor kid. <Enter the two kids>
The beggar speak( to the rich kid) : I am both hungry and thirsty to hell, could you please show some mercy to spare me some bread?
The rich kid: I am wealthy. I have a hill worth of bread and a lake worth of milk, but not a piece nor a drip of them would I spare you cause you are disgustingly poor.
The beggar speak( to the poor kid): I am dying from thirst and hunger, could you please show some mercy to spare me some bread?
The poor kid: I am so poor and I have only a piece of bread, but I am happy to spare half of it to you.
The beggar take off his coat, under which is actually Santa Claus.
Santa Claus( to the poor kid): Thank you, virtuous kid. May the happiness and peacefulness be with you forever and ever. This is a branch of pine, water it, fertilise it, take good care of it with your heart from now on, then it may bless you everyday.
Voiceover: Tiny by tiny, the branch of pine sprout and grow up to be a huge christmas tree, with all kinds of presents that only go to the hands of virtuous kids.
追问我英语不好,太多生词,看不懂,能在简洁点吗??
追答恩,但个别词语如“旁白”,觉得很难改啊,你只能记住了。
最后改成这样
Voiceover: long long ago, in this ice-cold winter, there was a poor beggar who was really cold, thirsty and hungry. . He comes to a village, where he sees a rich kid and a poor kid.
The beggar speak( to the rich kid) : I am both hungry and thirsty to hell, could you please spare me some bread?
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