问：能帮我看一下这篇英语作文么？这是我写的，我是初中生，能帮我指点一下么？看看哪里缺什么，多什么，
问：能帮我看一下这篇英语作文么？这是我写的，我是初中生，能帮我指点一下么？看看哪里缺什么，多什么，错了什么，语法和单词对不对与自己的美观程度。最高十分。帮我评一下谢谢，就像老师给学生批卷子一样谢谢，好的给高悬赏！！！
帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文 要求：没有语病,有分的哦
I went to guangzhou to visit my uncle and aunt.We played happily there.
The first day,we got to the airport of(这里应该用of还是in)Zhengzhou and flew to guang
zhou.Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there.
The second day,we visited my uncle andzhu jiang.The scene of zhu jiang is very beautiful.
The third day,we went to shenzhen by power car.We visited The window of the world.
there are many interesting places of different countries.we are happy in it.
finally,we wentshopping.my mum bought(应该用现完还是过去）four bags.mysister bought(同上）a trolley case.I bought nothing because they not fit in me(语法对?）
this travel tell me:the world is very big!
I went to guangzhou to visit my uncle and aunt.We played happily there.
The first day,we got to the airport of(这里应该用of还是in)Zhengzhou and flew to guang
zhou.Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there.
The second day,we visited my uncle andzhu jiang.The scene of zhu jiang is very beautiful.
The third day,we went to shenzhen by power car.We visited The window of the world.
there are many interesting places of different countries.we are happy in it.
finally,we wentshopping.my mum bought(应该用现完还是过去）four bags.mysister bought(同上）a trolley case.I bought nothing because they not fit in me(语法对?）
this travel tell me:the world is very big!
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