第1个回答 2010-09-30
书里写的只是一种答案。
你的想法是好的,遗憾的是答案是错的——因为and的作用只是列举,而语境中更需要一个侧重于说明原因的并列连词。
1)Change the comma to another punctuation mark
把错句中逗号改成其他标点符号:
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University; she is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.(分号)
2)Write the two clauses as two separate sentences
把错句分写为两个句子:
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University. She is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.(此种方法破坏句意关联)
3)Insert a coordinating conjunction following the comma:
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University, for she is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.(如前所述)
4)Make one clause dependent on the other
将其中一个分句改为另一个句子的从句:
Coach Espinoza really wants this job with Notre Dame University, because/as(从属连词) she is very excited about returning to the college she graduated from.(原因状语从句)
5)Use a semicolon or dash and a conjunctive adverb
用分号或破折号加连接副词:
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