谁能帮我校对几片英语的文章？急急急！！！

Question

第一篇

This is the last summer I stayed in the high school .If I have to say something about it ,I wanna say :"I miss my high school life very much." You must think that I am crazy .Yeah ,almost every student wants to get rid of this kind of monotonous life ,and so did I.However,after I became a real graduate,I felt so dull that I reall want to be sitting in my old classroom with my classmates ,listening to our teachers .Just at that time could I find my dream ,my goal and my enthusiasm.Maybe only in this way which is full of press can I be a supermen running after my dream without tire. So all we should do is to value what we are holding in hands and to be creative. Then,everything will be easy.
It won`t be long before I go to my new school and have my new school life .But I will always miss my high school life because I did try and I don`t have any pity .And as your senior ,my best wish for you is hoping so will you.

第二篇

I’m very happy to get the second prize of the English star speech contest. I shall never forget the experience and it shall be valuable for my study’s lift.
I have learnt something from the contest. The first is that if you want to succeed, you need to devote yourself to reaching your goals. And the second one is that we should face the difficulties in our youth directly. After that, our youth will become stronger, happier and more beautiful!
Getting this prize is only a small step of my lift. In the future, I will work harder to get better grades!

第三篇

The speech contest is like a travel, warm and charming. The most important point is that I have learned to grow. Perhaps this is the meaning of the travel.
The reason why I attended the speech contest is to forget about all of my stereotypical crap , and then dedicate myself to something more important than nothing.What I am asking is,just this once , for me to care .But I did not do well enough that evening .It made me down .
Even so .I think I will never forget it .and never forget my hard preparation .I do not forget my inferionrity complex .More importantly. I will never forget that many of my friends who cared and trutst me all the time when I faced the failure.
It feels like growing up in the travel.
Perhaps , as what I said in the speech.
“Forget about all the boundaries we’ve made to pen ourselves in . Forget about your prejudices,and what society has taught you .”
Be a good human.
Wake up .
Change the world.
Rise above.

Answer 1

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这是我最后一年的夏季在高中，如果一定要说些关於学校的话，我想说：“我很想念我的学校生活。”你一定会认为我疯了。是啊，几乎每一个学生都想获得这样的一种摆脱单调的生活，所以没有一但是，在我成为一个真正的研究生，我觉得很沉闷，我想成为雷尔坐在我的老同学与我的课堂，聆听我们的教师就在那个时候。能找到我的梦想，我的目标和我的热情。
也许只有这样，这是完全可以按我是超人，我的后轮胎的梦想没有运行。所以我们应该做的是什么，我们是持价值在手上，发挥创意。然后，一切都将是容易的。 它那倒没有多久，我去我的新学校，有我的新生活。但我会永远怀念我的高中生活，因为我曾尝试差得远呢，我有什么遗憾。正如你们的上级，我最大的心愿对你来说，你会希望如此。

2.
我很高兴获得了英文名星演讲比赛二等奖。我永远不会忘记的经验，并应为我的学习升降机有价值。
我从比赛学到了一些东西。首先，如果你想成功，你需要全身心地达到自己的目标。而第二个是我们必须面对的困难，在我们的青年直接。在此之后，我们的青年将变得更加强大，更快乐，更美好！
获得这个奖是我的电梯只有一小步。在将来，我会更加努力地工作，以取得更好的成绩！

3.
演讲比赛就像是旅行，温馨和迷人。最重要的一点是，我已经学会成长。也许这就是旅行的意义。
我之所以参加了演讲比赛，是忘记了我所有陈腐垃圾，奉献一点东西比什么没有也好。我所问的是，只是这一次，我去照顾。但那天晚上我做得不是很好。这令我忧闷。
即便如此。我想我永远不会忘记。永远不会忘记我的努力和准备。我不会忘记我的自卑感。更为重要的。我永远不会忘记，当我面临失败的时刻，一直关心和始终信任我的朋友。
这感觉就像在旅游发展起来。
或许，正如我在发言中说。
“忘掉所有的我们已经取得了自己到钢笔边界。忘记你的偏见，以及什么是社会给了你。“
要做一个好人。
醒来。
改变世界。
超越。

inferiority complex

Answer 2

第一篇
This is the last summer of my high school years. If I have to say something about it, I wanna say:"I miss my high school life very much." You must think that I am crazy. Yeah, almost every student wants to get away from this kind of monotonous life and so did I. However, now being a true graduate, I feel so dull and really want to be sitting in my old classroom with my classmates and listening to our teachers. Just at that moment I find my dream, my goal and my enthusiasm. Maybe only in this way, under pressure, I can become a superman, running after my dream without being tired. So all we should do is to value what we are holding in our hands and to be creative. Then, everything else will be easy.

It won’t be long before I go to my new school and have a new school life. But I will always miss my high school life because I did try hard without pity. And as your senior, my best wish to you is hoping that so will you.

第二篇

I’m very happy to be awarded the second prize of the English Star Speech Contest. I shall never forget this experience that will be invaluable to my future study.

I have learned something from this contest. First, if you want to succeed, you have to devote yourself to reach your goals. Second, we should face difficulties directly in our youth. Then, we will be stronger, happier and more beautiful!

Getting this prize is only a small step in my life. In the future I will work even harder to get better grades!本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

1.
这是我在高中的最后一个夏天。如果一定要我说些什么的话，我想说：“我非常怀念我的高中生活。”你一定觉得我疯了。是的，几乎每个学生都想摆脱这种索然无味的生活，其实我也是。但是，当我真正毕业了以后，我才发现这种想法多么蠢，我真的还想再和同学们一起坐在原来的教室听老师讲课。只有那个时候，我才能找回自己的梦想，自己的目标，自己的热情。或许只有用这种充满压力的方式，我才能成为一个追逐梦想的超人。所以，我们应该做的，就是珍惜手中拥有的，去创造更美好的。那么，一切将会变得很简单。
不久以后，我就要踏进新学校，开始我另一段新的校园生活。但是我会永远想念我的高中生活，我曾经努力过，也就没有任何遗憾了。作为你们的学长，我亦真心的祝愿你们如此，不要留下遗憾。

纯手工翻译，不过时间有限，要赶着去上课，暂时只能翻这么一段，也没有细细推敲，不过大意基本都应该是翻出来了，剩下的等我下课回来有时间再搞定吧。
还有就是，这文章肯定是中国人写的，都写成这样了，无语 ···

Answer 4

基本没什么明显的错误，你知道，在网上看就算错了也容易被同化，不过我读了一遍，没有大错，个别地方表达不地道，但是高中毕业这水平可以了~本回答被网友采纳