写作思路及要点：以My trip为题，围绕这趟旅途展开描写，接着表达自己的想法以及观点。
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My tirp to Beijing last year .I with my firend went to Beijing last year .We were had a great time .we climbed the Great wall and took photos of stone animals .
我去年去北京的旅行。我和我的朋友去年去了北京。我们玩的很愉快。我们爬长城和拍石头动物的照片。
We ate rost duck and bought some presentsto my parenets .Finaly,I visit the Palace Museum witn my firends.
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第1个回答 2014-08-25
I went on a trip to Hainan with my family on during the holiday.We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.
We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go.
It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.追答
We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go.
It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.追答
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本回答被网友采纳第2个回答 2014-08-25
I went on a trip to Hainan with my family on during the holiday.We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.
We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go.
It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.追答
We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go.
It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.追答
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第3个回答 2014-08-25
My Trip to the Zoo
Yesterday was Sunday and it was a fine day.I took a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus.I got there at 8:30 in the morning.There were many people in the zoo.Some people watched the monkeys,some watched the elephants,others watched the tigers.I saw many animals and took many photos.What a happy trip!
Yesterday was Sunday and it was a fine day.I took a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus.I got there at 8:30 in the morning.There were many people in the zoo.Some people watched the monkeys,some watched the elephants,others watched the tigers.I saw many animals and took many photos.What a happy trip!
第4个回答 2021-04-13
Summer holiday is coming. I am so excited. What will you do I think we will go to the grassland. I will go on a trip to the NeiMenggu. Because it is mygrandmotherˊs home.I will visit her. I will leave Langfang at 8：00 in the morning on July tentieth. My father will drives the car. I will ride horses. I will play with my cousin. I will eat mutton and beef.
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