求大神帮我看看有没有语法错误，比较简单

Question

Somebody may say that I have many friends,all of them are my true friends. Are you kidding? the old said A friend in need is a friend indeed. Did someone could talk with you all day was your friend?did someone play with you all day was your friend ?did someone said we are friends that you guys became best friends? Don't tell me that. In my views, my friend must be here and listen to my complain when I was sadness.my friend could know what I was thinking about without saying a word but in eye language.my friend could do the same thing to me, i was never mind,because we are friends,we are true friends. That's why I'm standing here to tell you something about mr.chicken.thats the reason why we cannot afford to lose friendship

Answer 1

第一句friends后用句号，all首字母大写；
the old said A friend in need is a friend indeed.改为An old saying goes that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Did someone could talk with you all day was your friend?改为 Is someone who could talk with you all day your friend? "did someone play with you all day was your friend ?did someone said we are friends that you guys became best friends?"这两句改法同上。
in my views 改为in my view
when I was sadness.改为when I was in sadness.
but in eye language去掉
i was never mind去掉was
另外注意标点符号和句子的句首字母大写