英语改错 每句最多2处 共十处错

Question

last year i buy a refrigerator in your store on Changan road. we all like shape of the refrigerator. and recently i find something is wrong with it ,it begins to make noise when it turned on. at first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder.to make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes.we all feel disappointing. i am writing you to ask for help. would you please send a people to repair it? i will at home this weekend. please call me before you come to here. my telephone number is 66065531. thanks you very much.

Answer 1

1.buy--bought(过去时)
2.like shape of---like the shape of（定冠词）
3.recently i find--recently i have found（recently是现在完成时标志）
4.something is wrong ---something wrong（固定搭配）
5.it begins--it began（过去时）
6.it become louder--it becomes louder（第三人称单数）
7.disappointing--disappointed（人+ed）
8.i am writing you---i am writing to you（writing to sb.）
9.send a people--send a person(people 为人的复数形式)
10.i will at home--i will be at home（be at home）

Answer 2

第一行 buy改为bought and改为but
第二行turned 改为 is turned
第三行 become改为becomes .to make改为 making
第四行 disappointing改为disappointed
第五行 will 后面加be 。a people 改为 a person 或someone
第六行to here 去掉to
第七行 去掉you

Answer 3

第一行 buy变成bought ，在shape前加the
第二行 and变成but,when it (is )turned on
第三行 become变成becomes
第四行 disappointing变成disappointed
第五行 people变成person ，i will (be) at home,come to here变成come here
第六行 thanks变成thank

Answer 4

1 disappointing---disappointed
2 will at home ---will be at home
3come to here --come here
4 thanks you ---thank you
5like shape of ---like the shape of
6 find something is wrong---find something wrong
7it turned on--it turns on
还有的不清楚了

Answer 5

last year i 【bought】 a refrigerator in your store on Changan road. we all like 【the】shape of the refrigerator.【 But 】 recently i find something is wrong with it ,it begins to make noise when it 【is】turned on. at first it is low but gradually it【 becomes 】 louder and louder.to make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes.we all feel 【disappointed】. i am writing 【to】you to ask for help. would you please send a people to repair it? i will 【be】at home this weekend. please call me before you come 【删去to】 here. my telephone number is 66065531. 【Thank】 you very much.

Answer 6

1 buy bought
2< the >shape of 加上the
3 turned turns
4become becomes
5disappointing disappointed
7people person
8 i will <be> at home . 加上 be
9 before you come{ to} here 去掉to
10 thanks thank