帮我改改这篇英语作文写的很烂我知道，帮我添加点东西，找一找错的地方，题目就是图片

Question

The passage talk about smoking in trainit will be easy to make the fire finally will caused a disaster to happen.
Smoking at the public will very easy tohave the fire and endangers other people healthy,the smoke can airpolluction.Smoking is not only injured meself but also to disturb others.
I dislike smoking in the public,because Ican’t stand the flavour.Now,more and more people the same as me hatesmoking,so we should the determination do not smoke in the public place.
For ourselves healthy,we shouldlifesmokeless environment.

Answer 1

手机打字不方便错误就不特别指出了，改好了你对比下吧
The passage is talking about smoking in some public areas such as trains. this kind of behavior is quite dangerous because it can easily cause a fire accident finally which is totally a disaster to our socioty.
in additional,Smoking at the public may probably endanger other people' health because the smok will pollute the air condition.Smoking is not only a threat to the public but also to a disturbance in their daily life.
the reason why I hate smoking is that l can hardly stand the smelt.Now,more and more people like me begin to fight against these smoking killers.in order to achieve the victory by using pratical methods,we should have the determination to create a pure environment around us.
For the sake of our body,we should cooperate together to built a wonderful world without any nicotine.
文章问题很多，很多词完全意思不对，我就删了，原文意思有动

Answer 2

The passage talks about smoking in train, and it caused some terrible fire accidents .
Smoking in the public place may cause fire and may do harm to people's health,and also it could pollute the air,so smoking can be harmful for people themselves and others.
I don't like smoking in the public,because I can’t stand the smell. More and more people also hatesmoking.So we should not smoke in the public place.
For our health,we should smoke less and protect the environment.
观点有体现。你的条理还需要更清楚一点。多用一些连接词，比如because ,also ,however, but等，注意分段。这样分数会更高。本回答被网友采纳