语法求助

请问Actually, with the rapid development of economy as well as society, large firms have offered job opportunities in mounting numbers.是否有语法错误,请高手指点,谢谢。

应该没有语法错误。with the rapid development of economy as well as society在百度上可以搜到其他相似的句子,见http://tool.xdf.cn/juku/889113.html;large firms have offered job opportunities in mounting numbers这半句也无误,in mounting numbers表示“越来越多的……”。来自:求助得到的回答
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第1个回答  2012-12-30
with the rapid development of 语法没错,但表达的是结果,与后面主句large firms have offered ...没有必然关系。而用with rapid developping of ...表过程,则与后句呼应。
as well as 放此处不当,容易使重点转移,应用and 代替。
第2个回答  2012-12-30
应该没。
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