谁能帮我用过去式写一篇以"MY SUMMER VACATION"的英语作文？快～～～５０字左右？

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推荐答案 2013-08-20

我来挑挑错
1,全篇文章是过去时的，用in my free time,因为in是指在假期时间内，后面的就要全用上完成时态了
2,my family（复数）就能表达我们一家人了，刻意地去表达成our families会使文章很累赘
3，on the radio是固定搭配，不能漏掉the
4,vocation居然会fantastic，上面的例子一点也不fantistic吧，建议用上meaningful有意义的

经过修改I had a happy summer vacation，which I could go through 2008 Olympic Games.A
t my free time,,I watched some matches of it,such as Basketball match,table tennis match and so on.They are so excting that my family are intrested in them.To another aspect,I listened some english programmes on radio in order to improve my poor English .
In a word,what a wonderful summer vocation I had.

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第1个回答 2013-08-20

I had a happy summer vacation.In my free time,I watched some matches of 2008 Olympic Games.For example,Basketball match,table tennis match and so on.They are so excting .so our families are intrested in them.
Sometimes,I listen some english programmes on radio.Because it can improve my english .
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第2个回答 2013-08-20

自己的假期是自己过的哦

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