求高手，此句最精辟的中文意思？另外此句可有错误？

Question

求高手，此句最精辟的中文意思？另外此句可有错误？Imprint is engraved on my heart. Experience and suffering more can prove that I could not live like an ordinary person, thought may not shilly-shally like ordinary people, Sakai Asaka was really my style.

Answer 1

Imprint is engraved on my heart. Experience and suffering more can prove that I could not live like an ordinary person, thought may not shilly-shally like ordinary people, Sakai Asaka was really my style.

有几处不妥之处：

imprint和engrave好像表达相同的意思，似有重复之嫌；

more是想说more experiences and sufferings还是想说can better prove that...?

thought may不知所云

Answer 2

Imprint is engraved on my heart.--牢牢的铭刻在我的心上。
Experience and suffering more can prove that I could not live like an ordinary person, －－过多的经历和遭遇能够证明：我不能像普通人那样的生活。
thought may not shilly-shally like ordinary people, －－尽管有时候也像普通人那样犹豫不决。
Sakai Asaka was really my style.－－Sakai Asaka就是我真正的风格。

Answer 3

Imprint is engraved onto my heart. Experience and suffering can prove that I could not live like an ordinary person, my mind may not shilly-shally like ordinary people, Sakai Asaka was really my style.
印记刻在我的心里。经验和痛苦更可以证明，我不能活得像普通的人，更可能不会像普通人一样犹豫不决，sakai Asaka 是我风格。

Answer 4

Imprint is engraved on my heart. Experience and suffering more can prove that I could not live like an ordinary person, thought may not shilly-shally like ordinary people, Sakai Asaka was really my style.

印刻在我的心。经验和痛苦更能证明我不能活得像一个普通的人，认为不可以犹豫不决像普通人一样，酒井朝霞是真的是我的风格。

Answer 5

印记深深的刻在我的心里。更多的经历和遭遇能够证明我不能像普通人一样活着，思想不能像普通人一样犹豫不决，Sakai Asaka 是我喜欢的风格。
句子没什么错误。