昨晚写了一篇文章，有没有英语高手帮忙看一下哪里有语法、时态之类的错误。

Question

有五年多没学过英语了，靠着以前的老本，因为心情问题写了一篇文章，帮忙看一下，有错的地方帮忙指正，谢谢。
Wrote With The Mood
I feel upset,really,for many reasons.I don’t know how to adjust myself but to face the reality and keep telling myself to hold on.For too long,I have been searching too many excuses which have given me too much hope. But now, when all these facts come rush to me at a time, I can’t even convince myself.
Sometimes,seeing so many former workmates leave me one by one,I would really feel sad,both for them and our company.For one thing,it is a pity that we are not being able to work together anymore,for another our company have fail us.I believe,there are at lest half of my workmates have the same feeling.Because we get no money,no time and no freedom,and even no privacy.But again,we have to face it when talking about the high unemployment.
What I have said above is about work,and what I am going to say is about life.As a single,in the remote city,I can’t not being together with family,though it is my choice,but the cost of living is really unable to bear.The price of house is also desperate.
About love,Frankly,I’ve got nothing to say.I am in love with a girl,but what a pity, it seems to be impossible,for now,at lest.But I don’t care,She should be my only reason to hold on,no matter how,If she do not leave, I will not abandon.
Maybe I need some more time to adjust myself.

Answer 1

标题：根据题意应该是随笔的意思，建议用Essay.或者Informal essay

adjust myself 不妥，adjust是调整的意思，不能说调整人，应该是其他的东西，例如心情、状态等等adjust onself to sth.或者adjust 加物主代词加名词，searching too many excuses 用making too many excuses.更好。

for another our company have fail us.这句有点奇怪，不知道本来是要表达公司让我们失望还是公司欺骗了我们？如果是让我们失望，建议改成for another,our company upsets us a lot.如果是欺骗了我们，那大概是单词打错了？是 have fooled us?
when talking about the high unemployment.这里的谈到并不一定是真的谈了，而主要是指想到，论及，考虑到，建议用when considering the high unemployment.
As a single 中的single 是形容词，要改成singlehood。,I can’t not being together with family此处多了一个not.而且can后面要跟动词原形，应该是,I cannot be together with family或,I can’t be together with family。而且此处用动作比用状态要好，所以可以用get together with family.,
though it is my choice,but the cost of living is really unable to bear.此处关联词搭配不当，在英语中同组关联词只用一个，即有虽然没但是，有但是没虽然，且句首大写,bear不够准确，改为afford更好。应该为Though it is my choice, the cost of living is really hard to afford.

it seems to be impossible，此处it指代不明，是结婚不太可能还是继续发展不太可能，还是她爱我不太可能？

no matter how,If she do not leave, I will not abandon.此句 no matter how后缺形容词，如艰难 tough 绝望 desperate

Answer 2

Something on the(my) Mood
I feel 【really】upset for many reasons.I don’t know how to adjust myself but to face the reality and keep telling myself to hold on.For too long,I have been searching too many excuses which have given me too much hope. But now, when all these facts come 【rushing】 to me at a time, I can’t even convince myself.
Sometimes,seeing so many former workmates leave me one by one,I would really feel sad,both for them and 【for】our company.For one thing,it is a pity that we are not being able to work together anymore;for another, our company 【has failed 】us.I believe,there are at lest half of my workmates 【having(前面there are，已经有谓语)】 the same feeling.Because we【have】【not much】 money,no 【free】time and【little】 freedom,and even no privacy.【However】,we have to face it when talking about the high unemployment.
What I have said above is about work,and what I am going to say is about 【my】 life.As a single,in the remote city,I can’t not【stay】 together with 【my】 family. 【Although/Though】it is 【from】my choice,【yet】the cost of living is really unable to bear.The price of house is also desperate.
About love,frankly 【speaking】,I’ve got nothing to say.I am in love with a girl,but what a pity！it seems to be impossible,for now,at lest.But I don’t care,She should be the only reason 【for me】 to hold on,no matter how【 the world goes on】.If she 【should 】not leave me, I【would】 not abandon 【our love】.
Maybe I need some more time to 【make myself adjusted to all these 】.I am looking forwarding to the promising tomorrow.

说实在的，你写的内容很不错！很真实的反映出了现实生活中的诸多感慨和无奈，思考和坚持，拼搏和坚韧。我由衷的为你的可贵思考和真情流露而赞佩你——这是时代最真实的声音！
祝你开心如意！追问

我以前呢英文成绩还是挺好的，只是毕业了好些年，工作上也用不上，所以生疏了。有些表达方式可能不对，我本来的意思是这样的，有些地方大家的理解可能与我有些出入。我中文打出来，大家看看，还有地方能合理点吗？或者改进。

追答

好的！

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