求把这封信翻译成英文,语法不能有错误,不要用翻译器

亲爱的--先生:
您好。我非常开心能给您写信。我是您的粉丝,我来自中国。
第一次看您的影片是电视剧《》,之后我从网上看完了您演的所有电影(不过我没有看过《》,因为我居住的小城镇没有电影院,真是非常让我感到遗憾...)不得不说您的演技真的是非常的棒,非常的引人入胜。当然您本人也是相当的有魅力呢,您曾经说过您对自己的样貌不是很有信心,但是我感觉您真的是非常帅气又亲切的人。我非常喜欢您的眼睛,透彻明亮美丽。
在中国有很多喜欢您的粉丝,(这一张信纸就是其中一个粉丝自己制作的哦。)我应该是里面英语最差的家伙,但是我也是真心喜欢您呢!我尝试着画了您的画像,希望您能收下。当然也希望您能在百忙之中在照片上签上名,嘿嘿,其实我主要就是想要您的签名呢。
最后,祝愿您能开心得过好每一天,要注意身体哦,事业固然重要,但是健康是第一位的。
(因为我--岁,又出生在小城镇,所以得不到很好的英语教育,如果语法或者措辞有失当的地方,也请您原谅,如果是---(这个空格是人名)一定会毫不留情的纠正我的语法错误呢。)

Dear Mr xxx,
  How are you? I am very glad to write this letter to you. I am a fan of yours and I am from China.
  It was the TV play < > that I saw for the first time of the films you have acted as role in. From then on I have finished seeing all your fims (except one named < >, which made me feel very regret because there is no cinema in the small town where I live.) I have to admit that your performance is quite good and interesting. Of course you yourself is very charming as well. You once said that you are not too sure about your own appearance, but i feel that you are really a handsome and kind person. I love your eyes very much , for they are clear and bright.
  In China there are a lot of your fans (This piece of paper is made by one of your fans on his own.)I think I am the worst guy among your fans, but I love you wholeheartedly! I tried drawing a potrait of you, which I hope you will accept. And also I hope you can spare your valuable time to sign your name on it. Hey hey... to tell the truth, it is my wish that I want to get your own signiture!
  Finally, I wish you be happy each and every day.Please care your health - Caree is naturally important but to be health is the first above all.
  (Because I am xxx years old and besides I was born in so small a town that I can't receive a good education here. If there are mistakes in employing words and in grammar, lease forgive me. I it were xxx, he/she would correct my mistakes without any pity.)
Yours,
xxx
这是我亲自手工翻译的,并且对你汉语里的我认为不太妥当的个别措辞进行了调整。希望对你有所帮助。如果满意,请采纳……亲。祝你开心!
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第1个回答  2013-06-23
Dear Sir:

Good day to you. I am very glad to be writing to you. I am one of your fans and I come from China.
The first time I saw a film starring you is the TV series <>. after which I went to watch all the films you have starred in (except for <>, because the small town I live in lacks of a cinema, not being able to watch that show has always been a pity to me) It is impossible to deny the fact that your acting is exemplary, it is very realistic for the audience. Of course you are very attractive too, there was once you said that you are not very confident with your appearance, but I strongly feel that you are really handsome and amiable. I especially like your eyes, they are crystal clear and beautiful.
There are many of your fans who are crazy about you in China, (Actually this letter paper was handcrafted by one of the fans) and I might be the worst in English among all of them. But I whole-heartedly like you! I actually tried drawing a portrait of you and I really hope that you will accept it. Of course I wish that you can squeeze some time and sign on the picture, actually I really wanted your signature.
Last but not the least, I hope you can live happily everyday. Please take care of your health, your career is definitely important, but health have to come first.
(Because I am --years old, and I am born in a very small rural town. My English education is not very good. If there are any grammar mistakes, please forgive me. P.s. if it is ---, he/she will definitely correct my mistake without sympathy. >:3)

语法绝对没问题 :)本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2013-06-23
Dear mr:

Hello. I am very happy to write to you. I am a fan of you, I am from china.

First look at your film is a television drama "", after I watched all the movies from the Internet you play (but I haven't seen "", because I live in small towns no cinemas, really let me regret...) have to say your acting is really very good, very interesting. Of course you also very attractive, you once said you to his appearance is not very confident, but I feel you are very handsome and kind man. I like your eyes very thorough, bright and beautiful.

In China there are many love your fans, (this piece of paper is one of the fans to produce their own Oh.) I should be in English is the worst guy, but I also really like you! I try to draw a portrait of you, hope you can accept it. Of course, you can also hope that in spite of being very busy in the photo on the sign, hey, I mainly want your signature.

Finally, wish you happy good every day, pay attention to the body Oh, the cause is important, but health is the first.

(because I - years old, and was born in the small town, so they don't have English education, good if the grammar or improper place, the phrase also please forgive, if - (this space is the name) grammar will mercilessly correcting my mistake.)
自己翻译的
第3个回答  2013-06-23
Dear Sir:
Hello -. I am very happy to write to you. I am a fan of you, I am from china.
First look at your film is a television drama "", after I watched all the movies from the Internet you play (but I haven't seen "", because I live in small towns no cinemas, really let me regret...) have to say your acting is really very good, very interesting. Of course you also very attractive, you once said you to his appearance is not very confident, but I feel you are very handsome and kind man. I like your eyes very thorough, bright and beautiful. In China there are many love your fans, (this piece of paper is one of the fans to produce their own Oh.) I should be in English is the worst guy, but I also really like you! I try to draw a portrait of you, hope you can accept it. Of course, you can also hope that in spite of being very busy in the photo on the sign, hey, I mainly want your signature. Finally, wish you happy good every day, pay attention to the body Oh, the cause is important, but health is the first. (because I - years old, and was born in the small town, so they don't have English education, good if the grammar or improper place, the phrase also please forgive, if - (this space is the name) grammar will mercilessly correcting my mistake.)追问

呃...太直译了...能不能地道一点...

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