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亲爱的房东
收到你的回信,得知我们可以租到 11月18号。
但是,很抱歉 现在才通知你我们在10月24号已经搬离出你的房子,
离开住了一年多的房子我们很遗憾。
因为某种原因,我们住的不开心,不得已做出临时搬家选择,我们承受着双面损失。
请你谅解。
如果没有其它原因。我们很乐意一直住下去,因为那里很和谐很安静。
现在房子是空的,我们已经整理干净,为了不浪费房间资源,希望你提前做出安排,
能否减轻我们的损失。无比的感谢你。
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帮忙高人翻译下恳请信,中文变英文。
回答:
Dear Mr./Mrs.,

Very glad to receive your reply and we have known that we could live in the house untill Sept.18. But we are awfully sorry that it is just until today that we would let you know we have already moved out from your house on Oct. 24. It's a great pity to have left the house where we lived for more than one year. For some reason we were unhappy to live in it and we had to make the choice to move out temporarily. And now we have suffered a double loss.
Please excuse us for doing so and if there were no other reasons we would have lived in it all the time, for it is very quiet and harmonious. The house is unoccupied now, and we have cleaned it up. In order not to delay to rent your house, we sincerely hope that you would make your arrangement in advance.

We would be extremely grateful for you if our financial loss could be reduced a bit with your kind help!

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards to you!

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第1个回答  2013-10-30
Dear Mr./ Mrs. Xxxx,

We learnt from your reply to our letter that we could stay on in your house until 18th November. However, we are sorry to inform you only now that we had already moved out on the 24th October. It is regrettable that we have to leave the house that we had stayed for more than a year. We were compelled to take this ad hoc option to move out due to certain reason, and this has made us sustain double losses. We beg for your forgiveness.
Actually, the house is a nice and quiet place, we are willing to stay on if not for that reason.
Now the house is vacant and we had already tidied up the place. We hope you can make early arrangement to rent out the house, as resources should not be wasted.
In the event that you consider reducing our losses, we would be very grateful for your kind gesture!!

Yours truly,

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第2个回答  2013-10-30
Dear landlord
Receipt of your reply, that we can rent to November 18.
However, I am sorry to inform you that we are now in October 24 has been moved out of your house,
More than a year left to live the house we regret.
For some reason, we live in are not happy, they had to make a temporary move choices, we suffer double damage.
Please understand.
If for no other reason. We are very happy to stay as, very quiet because there is very harmonious.
Now the house is empty, we have compiled clean room in order not to waste resources, I hope you make arrangements in advance,
Can reduce our losses. Unparalleled, thank you.
第3个回答  2013-10-30
Dear landlord to receive your reply, that we can rent to November 18th. But, I am sorry to inform you now in October 24th we have moved away from your house, we regret that we are left to live for more than a year of the house. For some reason, we do not live happy, we have to make a temporary move selection, we suffer a double loss. Please understand. If for no other reason. We are pleased to stay quiet, because there is very harmonious. Now the house is empty, we have to clean the room, in order not to waste resources, hope you plan ahead, can reduce our loss. Very thank you.
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