英文作文“我的幸福生活”这样写行吗

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My Happy Life（题目不用happiness吧……这样顺一点,但是如果是规定了的题目就不用改）
What is happiness?Happiness is when you get sick someone gives you a cup of water and medicine(吃的药用medicine)
Once I was sick in bed.He came home from work and saw me like this,and asked,"Are you sick?" (英语中没有冒号双引号表说话的用法）I said,“I have a bad cold and have a fever." He listened to me,and then poured a glass of water,took the medicine and let me take the medication.At that time,I was very happy!(注意时态）
In retrospect, （很奇怪的说法……改成in my memory会不会好点）happiness is so simple.It is just a glass of water and medicines when you get sick .This is my happiness in life.