我写了一封英文信,请帮我看看有没有错的地方,尤其是可数和不可数名词的复数形式

Question

莱坞--你的网友写信给你，问你是怎样学好英语的。请用英文给他写封回信，信中给出你对学好英语的建议：
1.坚持学习英语，一天也不能放弃。
2.经常复习巩固所学内容。
3.除了背好单词、学好语法外，还要多读书。
4.每天听半个小时英语以锻炼你的听力。
5.要多说英语，只有多使用你所学过的语言才能掌握它。
6.强迫自己读英文报纸和书籍，经过一段时间你就感到容易了。

July 20,2008
Dear Live,

After reading your letter of July 10,I know you want some advice about learning English.
So I tell you some of them now.
1.Sticking to learning is important,you don't give up for ever even if one day.
2.Reviewing the knowledge what you have learned usually is a good habit.
3.Enough reading is necessary to master English besides studying words and grammars.
4.In order to improve your listening ability,you need to listen English material at least half an hour a day.
5.If you want to master a language,you must train youself by using it continuously.So you also need to speak
English usually.
6.You may force youself to read English newspapers and books,after a period of time you will feel easy.
I hope these means could improve your English,I will help you very much,keep in touch please.
Yours,
Daniel

Answer 1

1.Sticking to learning is important,you don't give up for ever even if one day.
ever不需要。even if要加虚拟语气的从句

3.Enough reading is necessary to master English besides studying words and grammars.
reading enough 。 to master应改为for mastering

4.In order to improve your listening ability,you need to listen English material at least half an hour a day.
几乎没有看见listening ability的呢。用english listening就可以了,就好像我们说english speaking一样。也可以用listening skills。English material这样太别扭了吧。不如直接用English tapes之类的。listen 应该加to

5.If you want to master a language,you must train youself by using it continuously.So you also need to speak English usually.
usually用在这里不好。题目是说“多说英语”，我认为用as much as you can比较好吧。前面几位说So不可以放在句首，其实是可以的，so不仅是副词也可以做连词用。英语老师改卷的时候不会给你扣这个分数，诚然放在句中会更好一点。

6.You may force youself to read English newspapers and books,after a period of time you will feel easy.
may改can似乎比较通顺。根据题意用easier比较好吧。

I hope these means could improve your English,I will help you very much,keep in touch please.
means?这里用suggestions会比较好吧？不要用help you very much。这是不对的。不妨用I will do all I can do to help you。另外keep in touch please这句最好另起一句。如果一定要写在同一句那你这样是错的，应该用非谓语的形式或者加一个and之类的连词。

最后劝告你以后写英语作文最好不要这样照着翻译...虽然有的地方你注意了。但是还是免不了有生搬硬套的感觉。

Answer 2

没有

Answer 3

1. you don't give up for ever even if one day.
感觉这句话有点中国式英语啊!
学无止境 Always keep learning
4.In order to improve your listening ability,you need to listen English material at least half an hour a day.
listen 不及物动词, listen to
5. If you want to master a language,you must train youself by using it continuously.So you also need to speak
So 不能用在句子开头引导句子, 应该, so you also need to speak.
别的没有发现什么错误, 挺好的写的

Answer 4

1.advice后面介词最好用on
2.you don't give up最好用should not
3. your listening ability经常说 listening skills ability也 应该用复数
4.listen 不及物动词, listen to
5.So是副词 ,只有连词才能用在句子开头引导句子, 应该, so you also need to speak.