介绍自己的英语作文。帮忙翻译下。不要机器啊。急！！！

Question

大家好，我叫xx，我的英文名字叫kelsey。我xx岁了。我有很多爱好：看电视、看书、玩电脑和唱歌。我最喜欢的动物是狗，因为它很可爱。我还很喜欢动漫，希望能和大家成为好朋友，谢谢！

Hello, my name is xx, my English name is kelsey. I'm xx years old. I have many hobbies: watching TV, reading books, playing computer games and singing. My favorite animal is a dog, because it is very lovely. I also like animation, and I hope we can become good friends ，thank you!

上面的英语作文希望大家帮我改改。错的地方请直接改在这篇文章里发上来。谢谢！请快一点！
或是在上面的中文翻译成英文。但是不要机器翻译。谢谢！

Answer 1

我给你翻译一遍算咯~有些小地方我改了一下，这样更流畅，不会那么拖沓~估计你还在是中学生，我写的稍微简单一点。
hello,I'm a xx years old girl named
大家好，我是个XX岁的女孩叫XX，
xx,you can call me kelsey.I like
你们可以叫我KELSEY。 我喜欢
singing,watching TV,playing computer
唱歌，看电视，玩游戏和看书。
games and reading.My favorite animal is
我最爱的动物是小狗 ，
dog,because they are very
因为它们很可爱。
lovely .Animation is also my favorite.
动漫也是我的最爱。
I believe we can become good friends in a
我相信我们能在很短的时间内成为好朋友。
short time.That's all,thank you.
（结语），谢谢大家~

Answer 2

Hello xxx：
my name is xx and you can call me kelsey. I'm xx years old. I have many hobbies such as watching TV, reading books, playing computer games and singing. My favourite animal is dog, because it is very lovely. I also like cartoon, and I hope we can become good friend.
best regards
xx
如果你是发email之类的话就像上面那个。。就算是口语的话最后的thanks也最好不要。。你就说that’s all来结尾

Answer 3

前面都没问题 就favourite拼错